| "Light dancing with Darkness" Reviews/Comments [ 92 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kari On: January 19, 2003 19:34 CST
Comment/Review:
need more!!!
wite more real soon please |
Reviewed By: Phoenix1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2003 21:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an awesome story!! You have captured Yami's attitude perfectly!! Not to mention Seto's Cold, Calculating presents. I can hardily wait to see what happens next!!
PLEASE CONTINUE!! |
Reviewed By: Katmon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2003 22:03 CST
Comment/Review:
Whoa! Good going!! Can't wait for more!! |
Reviewed By: Nagai Oni Hime On: January 12, 2003 11:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the descriptions of the actions/characters in the fanfic because i never really go ino descriptions in my little novels that i write but overall, i like these kinds of fanfics(Don't worry, I'm not completely crazy over them--but crazy enough). Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: sweetdeath [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2003 19:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story... |
Reviewed By: malikzgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2003 18:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is damn good............write more...
o no......what happened to ryou |
Reviewed By: Naturi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2003 06:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
KICK ASS!!!!! I wouldn't mind surrendering to Yami or Seto myself, lol, but dang!!! Is Ryou still alive? And what about Jou? Man I sure hope so!!! Update soon!!!! |
Reviewed By: YumeTakato On: January 10, 2003 00:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Takato: I now have to explain it?
Yami: Yup..
Bakura: this'll take a while..
Takato: -growls at him- uresai Baka no Tomb Robber
Bakura: Baka no onna.
Yugi: *sighs, looks down and blinks sweatdropping* when'd I get into this Dark Magician outfit.... again!?
Takato: Erm.. -smirk- dunno. Anyways, this fic is just amusing and.. erm..
Yami: *in Takato's voice* And I don't know how to explain myself because I normally make Yami translate *aaalll* of my reviews for me.
Takato: O.O
Yugi: Yami... I can't believe you just did that....
Yami: -smirks-
Davis: ...-sighs- Ja ne!!! Hope you update soon!!!... Please!?
V-mon: YEAH!!!
Davis: no more chocolate bars for you
V-mon: -sob- |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2003 23:14 CST
Comment/Review:
So, is Ryou still alive? That was a pretty cool chapter with the fight and all. I think it's cool that Yugi could use magic, although, if both Yugi's and Jou's powers were increased by the tower then why didn't Jou do magic? Or is it just his strength that is increased? Oh well, please post the next chapter soon! |
Reviewed By: Kari On: January 09, 2003 17:51 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Awsome story!!!!!!
Write more real soon !!!!!!!!!!
PLEASE HURRY! |
Reviewed By: Kalea2882 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2003 16:58 CST
Comment/Review:
Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!! |
Reviewed By: Yami Tsuki Tenshi (Not logged in) On: January 09, 2003 15:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OYA OYA! Why did you end it?! CONTINUE SOON ONEGAI!!! PLEAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEE!!!! Kay... I thought you killed them for second... |
Reviewed By: Rinchan's flower [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2003 14:47 CST
Comment/Review:
this is really good! write more!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: ChaosEnd [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2003 14:32 CST
Comment/Review:
This is very good so far, I hope you keep updating. The 'fight' scene in chap3 was well done, and I was just wondering, have you ever read anything by Mercedes Lackey? If not, you might like her. Just a thought^^ |
Reviewed By: angel wings kit On: January 09, 2003 14:24 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it write more |
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