| "Light dancing with Darkness" Reviews/Comments [ 92 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kami_Karen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2002 11:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent cliffhanger...I want to find out what happens!! |
Reviewed By: Naturi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2002 07:13 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man you gotta update some more on this quickly!!! I almost felt Yami's magnetism through my computer.....and Seto's deadly stalker-like ways as well.. very descriptive!!! Pleas eplease please update soon!!!! |
Reviewed By: Lalalala On: December 25, 2002 20:31 CST
Comment/Review:
good! Very, very interesting idea, but hurry it up!Ugh, just please don't make Pegasus do anything too sick. I hate him enough as it is... |
Reviewed By: Eeyaatoe On: December 25, 2002 18:32 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a evil cliffhanger! Other than that the prologue and first chapter was a very nice start. I'm sure Chapter 2 will be wonderful. Update soon and keep up the good work!
~Eeyaatoe~ |
Reviewed By: Dark Lady Setsuna [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2002 16:48 CST
Comment/Review:
nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo more more more how could you just end it like that. plz update soon!!! plz!! |
Reviewed By: Nicole On: December 25, 2002 14:13 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great. Can't wait for the next chapter. Please post the other chap. soon. |
Reviewed By: sweetdeath [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2002 18:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey have you read ANNE BISHOP books??
thier realy good.they have the lihgt realm AND the dark realm but they also have the sadow realm ( NOT LIKE IN YUGIOH) |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber On: December 24, 2002 16:28 CST
Comment/Review:
This looks really interesting. I think you have a great idea for a story. I hope you can post the next chapter soon. |
Reviewed By: leev On: December 24, 2002 07:09 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ooooh, my favorite pairings in all of Yugi-dom! Who will get to Yugi first? Yami or Pegasus? Please post more soon! |
Reviewed By: Quatrina On: January 11, 2003 02:30 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
>_ |
Reviewed By: rain On: January 11, 2003 02:33 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
me want more!!! *gets on knees a begs* please please please please pppppppppllllllllllleeeeeeeaaaaaassssseeeeeeee!!! i'll love you forever if you write many lots more chapters. |
Reviewed By: Iczer6 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2003 17:56 CST
Comment/Review:
Interesting story... I want to see where your going with this....
Icz |
Reviewed By: White Phoenix On: January 09, 2003 22:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it!!!! Please continue! |
Reviewed By: Sweetdeily [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2003 22:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS IS ONE OF THE MOST AWESOMENESS FICCIES I HAVE READ IN AGES!!! I love the idea's and piling behind it, and i really, really hope you write more to it soon! You're grammar is a little off, but your plot line and general flow are fabulous!!! Please write more!!!!!!!!! Pleeeeeaaassseeee!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: KoNeko Motou On: March 16, 2003 12:01 CST
Comment/Review:
PLEASE,PLEASE!!!!!!!!!WRITE MOOOORRRE!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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