| "Light dancing with Darkness" Reviews/Comments [ 92 ] |
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Reviewed By: ChaosEnd [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2003 14:32 CST
Comment/Review:
This is very good so far, I hope you keep updating. The 'fight' scene in chap3 was well done, and I was just wondering, have you ever read anything by Mercedes Lackey? If not, you might like her. Just a thought^^ |
Reviewed By: angel wings kit On: January 09, 2003 14:24 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it write more |
Reviewed By: Ishida Takeru [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2003 12:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I think that its a good fic. Just seems a little bit rushed. |
Reviewed By: Eeyaatoe On: January 02, 2003 18:25 CST
Comment/Review:
Woooo! Sweet chappie girl! It seems that things are heating up fast. Usually that's a bad thing but the way you wrote it it came out perfectly. Chapter 3 better be out soon or I'll hunt you down and kill you...just kidding but really my impatient self can't wait that long. Update soon!
~Eeyaatoe~ |
Reviewed By: dovienya On: January 02, 2003 11:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE WRITE MORE! the storyline has been used before, but i really like the way you implement it! also, the spelling isnt the bet, but that can easily be forgiven. please write more soon! |
Reviewed By: Yami Tsuki Tenshi (not logged) On: December 31, 2002 20:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn... PLEASE DO NOT LET RYOU DIE... Uhm.. eh.. I wonder if Yugi and Jou heard... WHUT'LL HAPPEN! Update soon onegai?! |
Reviewed By: ruby redman and her yami On: December 31, 2002 15:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ruby: i loved it!!! it was fun- is cut off but yami ruby: you love everything you wuss!!!
ruby: she's insane, dont listen to her, anyway damm you for the rippin frippin cliffhanger!!!
wirte more!! |
Reviewed By: lil_lei_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2002 15:05 CST
Comment/Review:
Awsome story!!!
I cant wait for the next chapter!!!
write more really soon!! |
Reviewed By: Squall-sama On: December 30, 2002 00:32 CST
Comment/Review:
OOoooohohohooo! more please!? SOON PLEASE! |
Reviewed By: Solitaire and Xpyne [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2002 22:46 CST
Comment/Review:
Xpyne: That was great! Does everyone have the hots for Yugi? Well, I guess it's understandable...he is adorable.
Solitaire: Yeah, your story's pretty good, even if you're gonna hook up Seto and Joey. Eww. lol
Xpyne: Your story's really original. Update soon! |
Reviewed By: Kimbunny On: December 28, 2002 21:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh! This is a wonderful fic! Please finish it asap!!! |
Reviewed By: Balis On: December 28, 2002 19:56 CST
Comment/Review:
::big puppy eyes:: please continue.. so sad.. want to read more. ^___^ |
Reviewed By: Kirikou [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2002 19:03 CST
Comment/Review:
0.0
You're evil alright to leave it there! lol
But seriously...PLEASE write more soon! |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber On: December 27, 2002 23:30 CST
Comment/Review:
I like this story so far. This chapter was a little confusing with the Pegasus parts, but hopefully it will be cleared up in later chapters. Please post again soon! |
Reviewed By: sweetdeath [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2002 17:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH NO I need to know what happensssssssssssss*CRYS* |
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