| "Into the Darkness" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: LadyDraco On: February 28, 2003 17:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is good, but you need to improve on the spelling. I am looking foreward to the next chapter, if you ever write it. |
Reviewed By: Kimiko S. On: January 11, 2003 16:15 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This looks like a promising fic. Keep it up 'cause it was definatly worthy of my time. I'll be checking back every once in a while so don't stop writing, okay? I'm very curious as to what'll happen next. Until next time. Ciao. |
Reviewed By: aleric On: December 28, 2002 10:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just have one question; is this going to be a shoujo-ai story (Usagi/Shampoo)? It would be an interesting change of pace. If not though, it still looks like a good story. I like how you have the outers as the ones that Usagi doesn't trust. I'm a big fan of theirs, but it goes better with their personalities. |
