| "The Dream" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Zoey Hellmaster On: November 12, 2003 08:48 CST
Comment/Review:
You should write a sequel with Malik and Ryou!!! ^__^
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Reviewed By: The Darkness Itself [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2003 15:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
intresting... i'll give you that.... but in a GOOD WAY! |
Reviewed By: R_Winner [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 03:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW....Original I'll give it that! Poor little Ryou though! |
Reviewed By: Iyasu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2003 23:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
Leave it to Ryou to dream something like that. I wonder if he'll ever go to another aquarium again. |
Reviewed By: ShadoWwGrl On: July 06, 2003 19:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I thought that it pretty much really, really sucks! I personally liked the kind where they rapes each other. It doesn't tell why Ryou had that dreamed, and it doesn't make much senses. It dumb and stupid straight out okay! |
Reviewed By: NekoNeko (azureorchid15@yahoo.com) On: February 17, 2003 22:21 CST
Comment/Review:
I was laughing so hard...LOL...
lets hope Malik doesn't take Ryou to a seafood restaurant.. |
Reviewed By: Kaijou On: February 13, 2003 13:08 CST
Comment/Review:
Okay, that offically was the freakiest dream I think I have ever read about! But it was so cool! I really loved it. Please write more!!!But now I have to go and kick my yami's rootie tootie candy bootie for eating my candy bar and thinkin' she could get away with it! Bye, keep up the good work! More please, More!!! |
Reviewed By: Nkoah On: January 20, 2003 18:52 CST
Comment/Review:
This is such a cool story!!! How awesome...this is a really cool idea. I have a friend who had a dream similar to this one (only, it didn't eat her at the end), and we were miffed for a long time. LOL! So, yeah. Memories. ^-^ Anyway, great story ^-^ I was hoping for some fluffy cotton-candy w/ Bakura at the end :(, but it was still a fun story ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Madyamisam [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2003 14:45 CST
Comment/Review:
sing-song #I'M A FIRST REVEWER I'M A FIRST REVIEWER!!! And what do I have to say about this? EEEEEEEEEEEEKKKKKKKKK!!!! and eww.... I reveiwed at ff.net too but er... I hate how the system works over there when I tried setting my account. Anyway interesting... how you incorporate Ryou's sexual desires into the way a giant squid kills it's prey. BTW is that what really happens when a giant squid kills something or is it just the imagination talking? *shudders* It did give me the heebee geebees. But I guess that's why it's suppose to be a horror fic. |
