| "Sex, Blood, and Revenge" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Title: UPDATE ALREADY!
Reviewed By: Stephanie Kaiba On: October 14, 2004 16:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY, are you gonna update this thing soon or what? It's a great story but you haven't updated in over a YEAR! You CAN'T leave your fans hanging like this!
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Title: fwee!
Reviewed By: Bilbo-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2004 16:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this fic. And be glad that this is the first NC-17 I decided to review. ^^; Continue! ^_^
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Title: More plz!
Reviewed By: JessicaBainbridge On: May 04, 2004 00:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! I really hope you will write more to the fic and in the next chappie can you please write a lemon? You don't have to though... I can relate to Ryou's Yami! I would be sooooo horny I would probably hump a pillow! HEHE! Lemme stop... anyhoo, please continue! Thanks and toodiles! ; 3 Oh, and can you please add me in the ficcie? You don't have to but I would apprecite it if you did! Ur, if you do is it ok if I'm Mariks, Yami? Thank you, either way! -Jessica
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Reviewed By: Bluejay2099 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2004 23:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an awesome start. I love the idea of a female Yami, sense it hasn't been done yet. I also think that you portrayed Ryou perfectly. Completely honest and to innocent to go through with something like that, yet at the same time still human and attracted to a naked Kanika. Speaking of which, I can relate to her. I'd be horny after being trapped in a piece of metal for 5,000 years too. Plus, the fact that she apologized at the end for er actions shows class. My one and only critique is that a lot of the time we see the outward signs of emotion, but not the inward descriptions themselves. All and all this is one of the best fics I've read so far and is definately one for the favorites list. I can't wait to rea chapter two.
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Reviewed By: R_Winner [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2003 09:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
*cackles manaically* Gooooooooooooood Fic! Cute little Ryou... LOVE THE TWIST!!!! PLEASE DO WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: RyouLover On: February 24, 2003 18:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
R.L: Nice Story for the beggining, but when are you going to do the others?
Y.Bri: Aibou what have I told you about rushing the author?
R.l: Um... I don't know I forgot... What did you tell me?
Y.Bri: Whatever.... Anyway, good story!
R.L: Tell me!!!
Y.Bri: Bye!^_~ |
Reviewed By: Neo-QueenRini On: February 08, 2003 14:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this! Please continue! |
Reviewed By: koneko tenshi On: February 02, 2003 17:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
more!!! i LOVE IT!!! |
Reviewed By: AMGA On: January 26, 2003 17:43 CST
Comment/Review:
Cool. Please have more. Continue soon. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: malikzgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2002 23:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooo....write more.... |
Reviewed By: Pandapants182 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2003 22:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my! I've always thought of Pharaoh Yamster the Hamster as a crazed, hormone-driven pineapple head, but I never thought he would decide to keep the girl and not the boy.
Kya, who am I kidding, same difference! ^^ I've really got ot get around to writing Siri's life story... that'd be one for the ages.... anyway, this is soooooo good! You know, like part of the original story!
Must read more!!!! O_________O;;; *startes blankly at screen until the story updates*
Yugi: -_-0 |
Reviewed By: Shaina Carney On: January 01, 2003 16:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this and I can't wait for the next chapter. |
