| "A Trip to the Dentist" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: SuperHyperCrazyPerson! On: May 28, 2005 02:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool. It's a nice change from the angsty and dark side. I like how you focus on their love, how there is a non farfetched reason for there love, that it doesn't come out of the blue. I really like all of your fics.
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Reviewed By: Legolas Greenleaf72 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2003 18:42 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Considering the crappy day I've had, I needed something like that. You ought to do more. |
Reviewed By: Kanimoto On: July 06, 2003 11:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey...it's me!!! I read this fic at ff.net, and it is so damn FUNNY!!!!!!!
^_^
~KR |
Reviewed By: Katmon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2003 15:32 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm bored, lazy, and feeling stupid. Since I'm all these things at this very moment, I shall ask all my reviews, here and now, why you all like this fic so much? What did I do right? I NEVER get these many good reviews for any of my fics! What made you all like this so? {I'm only asking so I can't remember to do it again in the future!!}
And to anyone who really cares, Seto's visit to the dentist has been started, but I came to a roadblock, or a severe case of writer's block! Not to mention the fact that that chapter is getting a little deeper than I'd originally planned. Again, any ideas are welcome.
Also, Rosz of the Angel, from FF.N, has suggested I do a dentist trip for some of the other characters. What do you all think?! Should I? Any ideas are greatly welcomed, as always!! ^_~
Ja!
Katmon =^.^={AKA Okusama KK} |
Reviewed By: Shaina Carney On: December 30, 2002 17:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have a ten year old brother who hates the dentist.
I really don't like it either. ( makes me sick, but I'm not afraid of needles like my bro. They have to give him laughing gas
or he'll be a demon.) I have to have shots everyday cause of my dietbetes, but hey thats fine by me.
I like this and it would be nice if you would continue it. |
Reviewed By: sweetdeath [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2002 18:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
how cuuuuuute
keep going , how about next a shot???????
THEY don't like me when i havee to get a shot. thier evil I tell you evil..... |
Reviewed By: Lady_Knight On: December 24, 2002 15:47 CST
Comment/Review:
i think you should continue it, but don't ask me what you should do with the story next, I don't know. |
Reviewed By: Angelheart On: December 24, 2002 14:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Funny! I wasnt to find out what happens when Seto goes there! |
Reviewed By: Jessica On: December 24, 2002 14:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good and very funny!!! You should definatly write about what happens when Seto visits the dentist!!!!!!!!! |
