| "Change of Heart Trilogy" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: anonomous On: March 04, 2004 22:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED THIS FAIC!!!! It was so kawaii! ^^
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Reviewed By: pingpong [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2003 16:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
Now this would be a good fic if it had one thing in it....ME!!!! No really, Bakura is mine so Ryou can't have him... Oh great, now I have Ryou making puppy eyes.... OK, I have reached a decision... I'll get to keep them both...They are mine, you cannot have them!!!! /evil laughter/ |
Reviewed By: EvanescenceIX (formally Crystaldraygon98) On: February 24, 2003 21:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*starry eyes* ^^ excellent story! I'm the writer of Dark Angel on here (i think) and fanfiction.net....i don't know how to do anything here. ;_; this was a totally AWESOME story!!! The pairing, the descriptions....you had me hooked! (is that a right word?)
Bakura: such a weird mortal..
Ryou: ...
me: ^_^ well, don't stop here!! write more stories!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11 |
Reviewed By: pingpong [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2003 08:40 CST
Comment/Review:
PP- How sweet!!!
YPP- No it isn't...
PP- Baka tomodachi shizuka ni!
YPP- Ryoukai!!!!
PP- If everyone doesn't know tomodachi means friend and shizuka ni means be quiet
YPP- Ryoukai means message received and understood (I read you loud and clear). |
Reviewed By: AMG On: February 15, 2003 18:08 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwww... I loved it! ^___^ Thank you for finishing. =P HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY! ^_^Ja ne! |
Reviewed By: Yuki On: February 14, 2003 09:04 CST
Comment/Review:
WRITE MORE! I READ THIS WHOLE THING TWICE! I LOVE IT! POOR RYOU! POOR BAKURA!
Bakura:You say that all the time.
Ryou:I feel so sorry for myself!And you too Bakura!
Bakura:Oh!Thank you Ryou!I love you! *hugs Ryou*
Ryou:I love you too! *hugs Bakura back*
Yuki:O.K. guys! Thats so nice you love each other but we have to go!
Bakura and Ryou: No! I dont wanna! This story is great! Write more!
Bakura:Oh! And Yami, make sure she writes it fast.
Ryou:Bakura! Dont be so mean! But I agree with you! Hurry Yami! Tell her! |
Reviewed By: Yuki On: February 14, 2003 17:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved It!
Bakura:But it was short.-_-0
Ryou:You love me Bakura!
Bakura:.....ya...I do
Yuki:No! You REALLY do!^_^
Bakura:Shut up Yukiko!
Yuki:Dont call me by my whole name!
Ryou:Its Yukiko? That means snow child. So that mean Yuki means snow!
Yuki:Yes. It does. -_-0
Bakura: Yami! Make her write more! A lot more! And Fast! There should be one less then 2 days!
Ryou:Bakura!
Bakura: Yes my Love? I mean Ryou! ~_~
Yuki:Ha!Ha!
Ryou:Bakura? Do you mean that? I love you too!
Bakura: You do!? *hugs Ryou*
Ryou: Yes! *hugs back*
Yuki:You guys hug to much!
Bakura:Shut up Yukiko!
Ryou:Be nice Bakura!
Bakura:Fine!
Yuki:YES! Thank you Ryou!
Ryou:Your welcome...Sumiko..
Yuki:Oh no! Not you too! But I like that one!
Ryou:Thanks! It means Permanent child!
Bakura,Ryou, and Yuki:Ja! |
Reviewed By: AngelicMouseGirl On: January 26, 2003 01:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU HAVE ME IN TEARS!!!!!!! PLEASE COME BACK RYOU-CHAN PWEEAAASEE????!!! *SNIFF* IT'S A VERY VERY GOOD FIC!!! I LOVE IT TO DEATH! PLEASE HAVE A GOOD NEXT CHAPPY AND HAVE IT SOOOOO VERY VERY SOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!!!! ^_^ PRETTY PLEASE??! sOoN!!!!! ^_^ Arigato! Ja ne! |
Reviewed By: Bakura's and Ryou's Angel of Darkness On: January 24, 2003 16:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it write more please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*GIVES RYOU SOME SOUP* That will make him feel better ne minna? LoL sorry ne means right and minna means everone if u did not know k? OTAY! ^_~; Ja minna! |
Reviewed By: Karadaki On: December 24, 2002 19:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHH!!!!! I LUV THIS!!! its so cute!!!! ^______________________^ ::sob:: but so sad...poor Ryou... IM GUNNA GIVE HIM A HUG!!! THAT'LL MAKE HIM FEEL BETTER!!!! YAY!!!!! oooooo!!!! KEEP WRITING!!!! I LUV THIS FANFIC!!!! its so cool-ly written...darn, i cant think of a bigger word...umm, anywhoo, I LUV IT!!!! |
