| "Apology Accepted" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Athena--Chibi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2003 22:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was actually impressed by this fic, I haven't really seen anything like this before, which was nice, and I'm sure you understand what I mean when I say that I am *so* sick of reading the same thing over and over. I also liked how you included the other characters and yet didn't make them TOO involved, which let Duo and Hiro take center stage.
I was also gratefull for the easy read that this provided, because it had an even tone and none of the random switchings of the sophistication of the voice that was narrating. ^_^ So, thanks for that.
All in all, this is a wonderful fic, and even a moral to go with it: If you see Duo in an Elf Suit, then it is best to ask WHY before you crush his heart into tiny little pieces. ^_^V
~*ATHENA*~ |
Reviewed By: Brenda On: February 03, 2003 21:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SWEEEEET!!! Oh I truly do love this. I read Winning Duo on the Death & Dragon ML and came to read all of your other works. You are an excellent writer! |
Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2003 09:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heero in an elf-costum? lol, I'd love to see that. And the reactions he got at work, brillant. rofl. |
Reviewed By: Storm_410 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2002 23:05 CST
Comment/Review:
That is ADORABLE!
Very sweet fic. *grins* |
