| "E-Z Pick" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: damien_black On: June 29, 2005 23:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
Squall/rinoa or seifer/rinoa hell you could make it a squall/rinoa/seifer 3 some *kicks the shit out of ida* seifer/aquall is 1. too fucking disgusting 2. waaaaaaaaaay too played out
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Reviewed By: angellicrinoa On: September 30, 2003 20:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
You should check your writing for spelling and grammar issues, there's a lot of mistakes. Also, you threw it all in too fast, where's the detail? The description? Most of the enjoyment was amusement at your choice of words. Don't just use spell checker. Check the words too, for example, I assume Seifer wanted to 'propose' and not 'purpose' to Rinoa.
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Reviewed By: Anonymus On: April 16, 2003 08:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good I think it should be a Squall/Rinoa. Seifer and Squall get over played as a couple |
Reviewed By: Ida On: February 19, 2003 04:32 CST
Comment/Review:
SEIFERXSQUALL!!!!!!!!!*kicks rinoa* |
Reviewed By: WOAH On: December 29, 2002 08:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is very enjoyable although I don't know why you're not getting any reviews. Plz continue. I'd love to see what happens. |
