| "The Bachelor Party" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Kimmi On: May 04, 2003 12:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey there umm like plz plz plz plz plz update!! ive been waiting for so long to see whats happens and im going crazy!!! lol so plz update soon!! i really like this story line it makes you think about it alot! thnx:) PEACE |
Reviewed By: Kim On: February 10, 2003 20:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey im begging plz uuupdate !!!!! im like dying here plz plz plz i love this story its very creative and a great idea 2 well cya plz continue!! |
Reviewed By: Kim On: February 10, 2003 20:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey im begging plz uuupdate !!!!! im like dying here plz plz plz i love this story its very creative and a great idea 2 well cya plz continue!! |
Reviewed By: Kim On: February 10, 2003 20:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey im begging plz uuupdate !!!!! im like dying here plz plz plz i love this story its very creative and a great idea 2 well cya plz continue!! |
Reviewed By: Hisaki [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2002 21:33 CST
Comment/Review:
Aw...this seems like a really great fic!!
Only I'm not really a fan of Marron and Trunks. I kinda dislike it...
But you seem like a really great author!!! So...*swallows pride* gah, I guess I'll keep reading.
Heh...sorry! I'm just a really big T/P fan, that's all!! I just kind of didn't like the way you made Trunks see Pan as 'pathetic' and how he was so miserable to be marrying her.
Anywho...please update A.S.A.P. okay?
~*Rizu-chan*~ |
