| "The Balance keeper" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: Noaki [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2003 10:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep at this sotry, I look forward to reading more of it. If you need spell check/grammar I'd be glad to help whenever I can, contact me at Noaki@juno.com. |
Reviewed By: kinotama On: December 27, 2002 21:36 CST
Comment/Review:
Need I say it? WOW!!!
It's a great beginning and looks like it'll shape up to be a great story. You covered all the ends, yet there is two things I'm curious about: How did Ranma get disowned, and when did Ranma met Kami and Lucifer?
Keep writing more chapters, please. |
