| "Rain: MSTed" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] |
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Reviewed By: alexsei [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2008 10:05 CDT
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omfg, that was the most entertaining thing that I've read in a while. The story was hilarious on it's own - due to obvious reasons - but the comments on the story were even funnier, I think I almost died whilst I was reading it... you nearly killed me! anywho, what is the name of the author of the original story? I want to see if they are still writing, lol.
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Reviewed By: Bookkbaby84 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2006 23:47 CDT
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Oh my god! You're KIDDING me, right? No one writes that badly... I was howling just from the grammar problems! This gets a 100 on a scale of 10 from me. I had to keep muffling my laughter so I didn't wake everyone else up- the MST-ness of it actually made it readable. (I wonder how many months old the person was when he/she wrote this? Or how many brain cells they're missing?) Too funny! I almost want whoever wrote that atrocity to update it again so you can MST it. A fic like that is ASKING to get MST'ed...
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Reviewed By: Kethry [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2004 13:57 CST
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THE PAIN!!!! Between laughing untill I thought my gut would bust and the horror of the fic I think I have done myself an injury. >.< What... how.... BLAH!!! this fic makes no sense!! Hell I am dislexic and I do better than that! **gives up trying to express her feelings and dies** ~~Kethry MoonDragon~~
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Reviewed By: Noryn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2004 09:15 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
haahhaha!!!...suddenly it seems i want more of it...!!hahhahha!!
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Reviewed By: DirtyD On: August 05, 2004 22:46 CDT
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Oh god I had to stop reading halfway through. It was too painful, the story MSTed that is. It wasn't just the grammar, it WAS the story. It almost made me cry. No I'm serious! It was so poor it made me laugh and nearly cry. Oh jeez, I sound so horrible but... I'm not anti-Marysue, I do the Self-Insert shit (for laughs), this story is one, but lame orignal character stories like this... I can't stand them. Yes, the grammar is awful, but understandable, the story its self... the worst ever. Oh jeez, I tell you this, you weren't wrong to say it was the worst story ever. Making fun of other writer's isn't right, but call me vicious this wasn't wrong to be MST.
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Reviewed By: kitsune-oni On: April 27, 2004 11:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was thinking, if Sanzo isn't gay because Goku is a monkey and not a boy, then... does that make him an absolute perv with weird tastes?! *dies* It's funny - I have an account on ff.net, and I've never noticed crap like this. I think I'd amuse myself if I could find it. ^^
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Reviewed By: kitsune-oni On: April 27, 2004 10:54 CDT
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I read one review that mentioned this MST was mean because it was obvious the author was not mother tongue English. Seriously, what type of an excuse is that? *rolls eyes* Some of the best fics are written by people who don't speak English as a first language! Grr... My fav part of chapter 2: "then she said I want YOU GENJOSANZO Biggs: And then Sanzo says I don't want YOU MARYSUE" well there's tons... Every sentence just cracks me up, and since i'm in school it's not the best of things to be doing. I have to hold my breath to stop laughing... heehee!! I had to start writing this review half way through reading to calm myself down. That's a huge compliment from me, normally I don't laugh that loud. Oh man I'm rambling now... By the way, I love the wonderous tea scene. I wonder how the author even thought of that. I can image the newspaper headline: Cup of tea saves the day! All right, I'm at home now and may safely laugh my ass off. XD Yay. I think I might reread it all so I can give it the proper laugh. Or maybe not, that'd mean I'd have to force myself through more horror. Next chapter - woot! XD
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Reviewed By: kitsune-oni On: April 27, 2004 08:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I've never been fond of MSTs because... well the only ones I read were really mean. But this one... well the fic deserves it, badly. This just cracks me up, seriously. I don't know how you managed to read through the whole thing without barfing. On to chapter 2!! XD Damn, you have me reading bad fanfics... o.O
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Reviewed By: me myself n i On: March 17, 2004 09:15 CST
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FUNNY! that's the word 4 it...n HILARIOUS too!really bad grammatical errors there really r very few full-stops.but i like it...keep it up...poor goku killed sanzo n may? she's too perfect...but funny too...haha...hakkai n yaone...
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Title: mlisubaru
Reviewed By: mlisubaru [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2003 01:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
*dies laughing* *revives* *dies laughing again*
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Reviewed By: rei_mge On: August 12, 2003 06:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i've seen this fic on ff.net and i nearly died reading it...
IT WAS FRICKIN HORRIBLE!!!
But you made it better...yayayay!!! hehe, it was hilarious |
Reviewed By: Shiroki [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2003 06:43 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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hawmahgawwdd. i have a sore throat from not laughing, or trying not to laugh. out loud. too loud. ^^:;;;; i wasn't consciously counting or anything, but i think i noted something like two fullstops the entire three chapters. freaky. you three are great for laughs. seriously. XD. wonder if the original was a parodial mary sue itself. guess that would explain things, yah? *sweatdrops* thanks for alot of hysterical non-laughter, stifled laughter, muffled laughter, swallowed laughter, etc,etc,etc. especially since i'm supposed to be studying for a string of exams that start tomorrow. ahahaha. very nice work. thanks again. |
Reviewed By: hyper-genki On: May 05, 2003 05:47 CDT
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that fic was probably the WORST saiyuki fic ever! *laughs head off* that was funny, man! ^^v i couldn't stop laughing here in my chair. ^___^ god, what a fucking mary sue the may (whoever she is) is! *pouts* i abhore her. ^^ whoo, and unfortunately, sanzo never got his head back. goku's weapon was the almighty fork, hakkai's were bombs and gojyo's (or gojo's...or goyo's even. :P) weapon turned into a bloody teacup! T.T How horrible can this get. BTW, your MST is great. |
Reviewed By: crazzzybanana On: May 04, 2003 07:16 CDT
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Oh my gawd! I read the fic in FF.net and it was crappy! ...No, it was FUNNY! ...and stupid. My companion and I didn't stop laughing. If I were to change the genre of this fic in FF.net, it would have been Humor. BTW, nice MST |
Reviewed By: Love for all seasons On: April 14, 2003 10:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If the author/authoress isn't fluent in English, don't write in English!
Anyway, this was waaaaaay funny. I think I'll have breathing difficulties for a few days...don't worry, if I develop any sicknesses, I won't sue you. ^_^ |
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