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| "Beausford Bobcats Upgrade" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] | Reviewed By: Saiyan Genius [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2003 01:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was well done J'dee i loved the way u used the Goku stuff as well.
Carrot juice, must have
^_^
Poor Steve, he wouldnt even help wit mai garden, he must b sad, he needs to be huggled, not glomped, huggled.
And i got to light Quorkys hat on fire what a bonus!
O_o but who's this Tessa girl glomping steve for his hair....
That is not how u recover from trauma, and that i know
But he loves it, i no
^_^
Anyway, i had 2 b serious 4 one part, J'dee this was wicked
Keep it up | Reviewed By: DeathStorm [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2003 23:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwwwwwww, but oooooooooooo! Iiiiiiiiiiiiinteresting, hmmm. ^^ Such a cool story, poor Charity. Tsk tsk. Please update soon! Mesa seriously be gettin into this!
YLG,
DS | Reviewed By: DA! On: January 01, 2003 14:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dudette, you do realize Im gonna give you 10's on all of the rating things, rite? Pssh oh well.
Loved the first chapter, Im sooo sorry it took me so damn long to read it. Everytime I tried to someone would bother me!!! *growls*
Familiar: I NEVER GAVE YOU PERMISSION TO BE IN THIS..THIS STORY!!
Shut up. You know you liked it! Dont listen to stupid there J'dee, she's on crack.
Familiar: I am not!!
What did I tell you about lieing?! Anyways, On to the next chapter! I just hope I get to finish reading it today... -.-''
DA- The All Mighty Powerful Bytch | Reviewed By: Saiyan Princess TRF [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2002 18:58 CST
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Hiya again J'dee! Another great chapter! Tell Krista the naked man idea was pure genius, I was laughing for about 3 minutes before I could get over it enough to continue reading.
Heero: Not that I didn't 'help' her with that *rubs his gun affectionately*
Now whenever someone mentions cows I'm probably going to burst out laughing...
Heero: Causing you much humiliation?
Most probably. How am I supposed to explain to school preps that I read something in which a naked man walked around and petted cows? They'll think I'm insane or something! Well, I am but that's beside the point.
Heero: You're not just insane, you're completely pyscho.
Nu-uh! I don't murder people! And by the way...Charity was murdered? Oooh! That means no one will ever again get in the way of mine-errr...TESSA'S Heero glomping! Glee!
Can't wait until the next chapter! | Reviewed By: stina-chan the lazy girl who doesn't feel like signing in On: December 31, 2002 00:37 CST
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see i'm telling you s'rac is a sex machine now theres no stopping him *cackles madly*
tis the truth
*looks up at steve* now that charity's out of the way....
deirdre gets a chance, you go girl, french forever!!
stina-chan | Reviewed By: Srac [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2002 22:35 CST
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The chappy as great! I was waiting for it hehe. O my poor ficcy gf.....she died so young. Ah I barely knew her.... Oh well I'll get over it. Lol. Anywhoz, twas a chappy of greatness! I wanna nother one now.....-_-;;; Lol. Well keep up the great work! S'rac | Reviewed By: Saiyan Princess TRF [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2002 20:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hiya J'dee! Great chapter! I was laughing so hard in soem parts I thought I was gonna fall out of my seat.
Heero: That's only because you're easily amused.
Shut up Zero boy. Steve has Heero hair? Ooooooooh!!! I can see why I'd glomp him, seeing as the ORIGINAL won't let me anywhere near him.
Heero: Damn straight *holds up a gun*. Besides, YOU aren't glomping anyone, TESSA is!
Me, Tessa...same difference. Anywho, nice chapter J'dee!
Heero: You said that already.
No I didn't! I said GREAT chapter!
Heero: *smirks, then makes his voice sound mocking* nice, great...same difference.
*glare* I hate it when he uses my words against me! *sob* Oh why muse oh mine...why must you cause me such anguish* *sniffle* Maybe...maybe Wuffles would be more understanding in th end...
Heero: NO! You will NOT replace with me that obsessive-compulsive justice freak! I forbid it!
*Picks up phone and begins to dial the Muse Agency* H-hello? I'd like to request a-*Heero cuts her off by shooting the phone*
Heero: Don't do it! I'll let you glomp me so long as you don't do it! I've been returned four times already, even by my obsessive fans!
That'll teach you to criticize me so...
Heero: Do you know what happens to muses who are returned five times?
No?
Heero: They are...*whispers some horrible, unlawful, evil, torturous thing that puts a lot of other horrible, unlawful, evil, torturous things to shame*
*Gasp* Poor little Hee-chan! I'll start that glomping you promised me now! *latches onto him* | Reviewed By: Sayuri-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2002 20:06 CST
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tru tru.. s'rac loves the attention.. *whisper* he thinks hes a sex machine.. *giggles insanely*
ahem..
tis a wonderful fic...MOREMOREMORE!!! ^_^
my hand is bleeding.. i just realized that..
lalala..
ja! ^_~ sayuri-chan | Reviewed By: stina-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2002 19:57 CST
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merci ma cher, c'est trés bien ^_^ j'aime beaucoup, nod nod
*whispering to j'dee* the only reason s'rac loves this fic more then the others is because he gets to be lusted over... shh don't tell him i told you that
lol :P
great writing must write more.... MORE....MORE!!!! heehee sorry i be quiet now...
anyways g2g hun ttyl
*the honorable*
stina-chan | Reviewed By: Jeril Dragonsoul On: December 28, 2002 02:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gotta love it!! ^_^ Bob!!! *glomps* I missed you!!! *snuggles*
Bob: Quack!
Jeril: O.o... duck? Hmmm... stop changing shape on me, Bob! First you were an angel, then a fallen angel, next a cat and now a duck!!! *growl* You always do that!! Well, if it works, use it!! *huggles the duck* Bob, Bob, Bob!
Bob: Quack!! *tries to fly away* | Reviewed By: BananaGirl On: December 27, 2002 13:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ORLANDO VS ELIJAH???
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
A magazine was doing an Orlando VS Elijah thing. The biased bastards! They claimed Elijah can only make cheese toasties and doesn't wash his face, but made Orlando out to be an Action Man! Just they wait until they revieve the mail bomb! Fly Quorky, FLY!
Quorky: That's 'The Wizard Of Oz'. I do not fly.
Damn! Ooooooooooo, ace fic!!!
Quorky: I think not
Only cos you're a toy and don't speak!
Quorky: Well, J'dee oviously needs to sort out her priorities | Reviewed By: Srac [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2002 08:09 CST
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Yay! That was greeeeeat! I wonder who I am. Gee I just don't know. *cough*Kuno!*cough* What? I didn't say anything! Really....... Er...well andywayz, great start! I can tell this fic's gonna be sooo koool! I want more now......Gak......Now I guess I'll have to find something else to do so I dun think about it an be tortured and...hey look I'm rambling. This is all ur fault J'dee. -.-;;;; Lol Anywayz great fic and I can't wait for more so get goin'! Heh S'rac | Reviewed By: stina-chan On: January 19, 2003 22:10 CST
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mmmm....lucas, deidre wants lucas *placing mental notes into j'dee's brain....mmmmm
lucas almost as nummy as liquorice.
*chuckling* |
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