Reviewed By: Shad On: December 29, 2002 08:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, yes. Another enjoyable one, pity it's not longer.
You *do* need to get out of the habit of using <> as other-language identifiers, though -- that or correctly escape to < and > them before converting the story to html... It's a bit distracting when you see empty speeches...
In all, good fic. And Edema is always fun to see. :)
.... Hmm, has Edema been drafted as Genma Replacement yet? There's a thought... Anything-Goes Martial Arts Swordsmanship and Ice-Cream Vending.... |
