| "Want" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Etowato On: April 15, 2003 17:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa!! The part about Van was unexpected. And I love your writing style! I'm giving you perfect rating b/c I will never be able to come up with something as beautiful as this. This is a perfect one-shot but I would love a continuation of the story! Anyway this is excellent! |
Reviewed By: german milk maid On: January 05, 2003 20:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, truly a work of art.
I can't but help seeing from her point of view while reading this. It was so good, you should do more of these; heck, there should be these period! But then again it would ruin the originality.
l8trz
~Gm&m~
P.S.*laughs* 2 o'clock is the calm before the storm I suppose. |
Reviewed By: forgot my password On: January 06, 2003 11:28 CST
Comment/Review:
er... rite... that was wrong... our minds are now scared from ur fic. dxv is wrong. dillandau deserves better. |
Reviewed By: Equinox [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2003 00:13 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh that was good. I've never been a fan of monologues (perhaps becase I've never read or heard any truly good ones) but that was excellent, absolutely amazing. I found myself identifying with Celena feeling her pain and longing. I'm trying to think of more complementary adjectives but my brain has shut down. (It's late). So I'm just going to say keep up the good work and that I throughly enjoyed this piece.
~Nox |
