| "Inhibited Passion" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] |
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2003 21:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, that was an interesting developement. I bet Victoria causes prolmes for our couple in the future. I love the way you set it up like that. You're a very clever writer. Please update soon!! |
Reviewed By: Animechick On: July 26, 2003 20:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this so far. Great job with the originality! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2003 19:16 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Aw, poor Bulma. She just feels so unloved... Honestly, I think I was mildly confused when she was just... THERE at the restaurant waiting for him and THEN he took her home. I guess I was wondering how she got there in the first place. Well, I can't wait for their next meeting-- whether it be the date on Saturday or ... school? *raises eyebrow and can't help chuckling* I must be evil... oh, and thanks for bringing up that she's 18. I feel better now. *lol*
*heh* Did you think I wouldn't be back? Well, here I am! Okay, okay, I'll leave you to your writing, now and go back to mine. Keep writing! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2003 23:34 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*grumbles to self* Not only did I misspell "Knight's" in my last review... but I somehome MISSED the uploading of this chapter!! *scolds self* Bad, Janelle, BAD!!!!
*he he he* I LOVE Vegeta's nature in this. I love it, not only is he as gorgeous as he usually is... but he knows a fine woman when he sees her. He was so... BLUNT. *giggles* I don't care if this chapter was short. I can't stop smirking...
Well, I'm off to read the next chapter (if nothing goes wrong--damn just did. I'll read the new capter tomorrow:)... keep writing this! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2003 23:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story freakin rocks. I think it's quite original. Please hurry with your next update!! |
Reviewed By: BlueDevilAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2003 11:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fic! But when you do another chapter can you tell ous how old Bulma and Vegeta are. I got a little confused during some parts. Thanks! |
Reviewed By: SaiyanGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2003 10:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic. Just the thought of Vegeta as MY teacher and him having the hots for ME makes me want to throw out all the morals I have left. Its not like the age difference between the two is like that big.
I adore the fic and can only hope for from you soon... very soon.
Love'n Hugs
SaiyanGoddessBX |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2003 00:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For some reason, when I read this fic I hear a proper english woman speaking. It must be your style-- it sounds proper to me. ^_^
Poor Bulma! *wills Veggie to go hug her* Her parents are horse flanks! (Sorry, I just watched "A Night's Tale" again and I couldn't help laughing when the guy compared the girl to horse flanks... which could also explain me "hearing" an english woman's voice narrate the story)
*blinks* Wait a moment... Bulma and Veggie's houses sound identical... *grins* Can it be true?!?!? :D (Then again, I'm probably seeing something out of nothing) *runs off to re-read the chappie* Nevermind, some of the details of their descriptions of their houses aren't the same. :( I got my hopes up-- I have a habit of doing that. -_-
Hm... I guess what Vegeta was thinking made me think. Him having a guest... so if it's not that there's a mix-up and they're sharing a house, then something will happen to have Bulma lose hers... or she'll just be staying over for some reason. (needing a place to hide out or something) *shakes head* Sorry about that, I also tend to speculate and overthink things.
*snickers* All voices/speculations aside, I can't WAIT for more to come! ^.~ |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2003 15:54 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I want more of Vegeta-- I mean, the fic. ^.~
This will probably be better than the "Hot for Teacher" songfic I started with Bulma as the teacher and Vegeta the student. *lol*
If Vegeta were MY teacher, then I'd be hot for him. O.O |
Reviewed By: cuttie_blossom [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2003 19:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi, this is one of the best fics!!!!! please please update!!!!!!! please!!!!!! that's all 4 now
ja |
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