Reviewed By: Lord Augustus [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2002 20:33 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I'm not a Sailor Moon fan, but I do like this. Your prologue could use a little cleanup, and perhaps a division of when certain scenes take place.
An enjoyable read nonetheless.
Good luck,
~Lord Augustus |