| "The Saiyan Companion" Reviews/Comments [ 35 ] |
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Reviewed By: arovak On: August 10, 2003 20:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey luv the story. vegeta is so MEAN to do that to Ka. well write again soon |
Reviewed By: Talon Sage [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2003 22:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*stares*
Oh please finish chapter seven...PLEASE!!!!!
*whimpers*
Hurry...I can't take it much longer!!!
*grins* Wonderful...I'm dying at ka's masturbating experiments...and I'm about to kick Vegeta in the head if he doesn't get his head out of his ass!!!!!!!!
*mutters* He should have just spanked him... |
Reviewed By: Plyric On: July 14, 2003 23:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent story! I thought you would never update (uh, hold on while I turn that mirror back on myself ;) ), but now that you have I think it's more than worthy of a review! Can't wait for the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2003 20:45 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Everyone knows that I'm not the biggest yaoi fan in the world, but this is a very well written, well crafted story. I am enjoying it so far and am anxious to read more. |
Reviewed By: goku mum On: July 14, 2003 18:39 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Kaka, he misses his daily attentions from the Prince, well I hope Vegeta will stop his punishment soon enough to give us some nice smut in the next chapters. |
Reviewed By: Khandy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2003 13:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kaia, I don't have to tell you how much I love this story, but i'm going to have to...its the only way to get to you update! You teased me with chapter 5, I was sure poor Kakarot was going to get some loving! Well, I guess that's what the fool gets for drinking with the other saiyajins.
I'm on pins and needles waiting for the next chapter! Keep it up babe, it was great! |
Reviewed By: Kalea2882 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2003 20:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2003 17:11 CST
Comment/Review:
Kakarot drunk....too funny!
can't wait for his punishment. Heh heh! |
Reviewed By: Myself On: March 22, 2003 14:16 CST
Comment/Review:
Yummy, more! |
Reviewed By: Lauryn S. On: February 09, 2003 15:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, that about time. that you have give me (maybe us) more of this drug. yeah, i can not get enough from this one. but they are right with
concubine and consort issue. that not the same.
it would be nice, if vegeta can get more odds on kakarotto compared to other saiyajins. i see at the other reviews i am not the only one, that won't kaky going fight and going ssj.
you doing really a great job. i too want to know. if it was a insult for kaky to be make in a conubine rather than a warrior. yes, you have mention it in chapter 2, but it is not really clear. had kaky even friends besides this old warrior.
sorry, but i am more interessed in goku life. where it is so complete different. vegetas is not. he is the prince as ever. |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2003 18:07 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
a good start of a great story keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2003 18:11 CST
Comment/Review:
Well, keeping him in the kitchen will definitely keep him occupied, but what if he eats everthing! O_o Maybe not. this kakarot seems a bit more...tame, I don't know. I like this. Vegeta's not gonna like him training! Update soon |
Reviewed By: Zack On: January 10, 2003 10:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW, and you wrote that in one day.. |
Reviewed By: little_ninjin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2002 11:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The best part about your fics is how you're not afraid to intermingle sex with the characters' lives. That's where the good and the bad pwps are seperated.
Vegeta cares about kakarot- what a new way to lok at things. it's refreshing- i like that!- and poignant. People always say they want more when it's good- so i guess i'm sayin it's good when i ask...;) |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2002 22:08 CST
Comment/Review:
Yay, great short sweet story. I have a soft spot for Vejitasei AUs. And dominance. Definitely deserves continuation/elaboration.
Man, what WOULD Vegeta do if he discovered his concubine had potential to go SSJ? Oh the sparks that would fly... |
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