Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2003 00:47 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Ok, this makes NO SENSE TO ME!! What is it with the readers at MM.org? At ff.net, fics that have terrible spelling and grammar, and lame plotlines have DOZENS of good reviews, when something of this caliber posted here at MM.org has ONE REVIEW!! This was GORGEOUS! WHY DON'T PEOPLE REVIEW HERE??? ~shakes fist~
Ok, rant's over. Sorry about that.
This was beautiful! So erotic, so romantic, just WONDERFUL! I loved every bit of it!! It may have been just a touch OOC, just because it's hard to imagine two males speaking so intimately to each other in such poetic terms (but OH what wedding vows what they said would make! ~sighs~), but it was just so tender and beautiful that who the hell cares if it's OOC? Just a beautiful piece of ficcage!! Now I MUST go read the rest of the Incredible Edibles!!!!! |