| "Smoke and Mirrors" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: gofamofa20 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2004 20:30 CST
Comment/Review:
I was a little reluctant to read all 10/11 chapters but I have to admit it's quite an creative story. Thought I do not like all aspects of your story i.e. Jiara's betrayal to Goten, it's still a good story. Now that I'm slightly hooked to it I hope you'll update real soon.
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Reviewed By: Zungda [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2003 08:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my God! That was awesome! This is the best! Hurry and finih, I can't wait to see what happens!!! |
Reviewed By: Hisaki [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2002 23:56 CST
Comment/Review:
OMG This is such a good fic!!! Please continue!!! ^_^
~*Rizu-chan*~
PS: I'd write more, but it's 1 in the morning and I'm too damn tired to go on about how much I enjoy this story... ^_^;; |
Reviewed By: lillithan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2002 10:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now that was a twist I wasn't expecting! You've got my curiouity going now. Can't wait for the next chapter!!! |
