| "Tentacular" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: DeepBlue1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2006 19:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sweet......god I have seen a fanfic i love. Its nice but you could have added a bit more in description after the battles or during them. On a final note.....i like it alot. Jerihco: Must eat...fiiiiisshhh
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Reviewed By: J.R.Karsten [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 17:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
As good as a Pokemon lemon using Pokemon gets... as a note, if you added in a little more of a description of this 'battle' rather than ending up having everyone like it in the end... more of the 'how powerfull this feeling is' rather than just saying an hour later they want more could be a good follow up. However it's well done, and very interesting to read also. However, I have to say it's been done before in other ways, so it's not a 10. The good things are that you've added the fact that everyone is highly in character, expecialy Ash. All and all, good work.
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Reviewed By: Moon bind [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2004 17:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
Lol that was sooo cool! lol Ash is realy, realy naîve!
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Reviewed By: yomofo On: March 07, 2004 22:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man I want a creature that can insert orgasm creating tentacles into my ass
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Reviewed By: ANOTHER PERSON On: November 10, 2003 22:20 CST
Comment/Review:
JUST TO TELL YOU, TOGEPI SAYS "TOGEPI" NOT CHOKI-BREE
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Reviewed By: blcrane52 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2003 00:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay..... It was kinda weird, but it was an alright fic. |
Reviewed By: SilverShade On: July 25, 2003 04:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED that! It was different but GREAT! |
Reviewed By: Sailor Anime On: January 07, 2003 00:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Boy,that was a great fanfiction! Hope you write more! |
