| "Twisted Fate" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: wan On: February 08, 2003 16:24 CST
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Could you please update soon?! Please! How many times do I have to review before you are kind enough to update? Oh please update. |
Reviewed By: wan On: February 05, 2003 13:06 CST
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When are you going to find the 2nd chapter? I want to read more! Please! |
Reviewed By: wan On: January 20, 2003 15:10 CST
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When will there be more? Please put the 2nd chapter up! |
Reviewed By: twilight On: January 02, 2003 23:10 CST
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It was great! A fe typos, but I enjoyed the way you wrote it and the idea of having Ken and Sam together again. I found it really sad in the show when Ken's brother died. Although Sam appeared to treat Ken horrible sometimes, all he needed was a second chance. I'm glad that you've written a chapter where Ken learns how his brother really felt. Until next time, keep on writing. |
Reviewed By: Karuteru Ichijouji On: December 31, 2002 17:50 CST
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That was great! Really! I can't wait for Chapter 2! ^.^ |
