"After All These Years" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang On: August 27, 2005 17:03 CDT Comment/Review: I'd call this a piece of crap, but I don't to insult crap.
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Reviewed By: DarknessAngel.com On: November 24, 2004 14:46 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I can see why you call yourself; Madness of the Lady Tiger. This fics is totally insane and not in good way. What I didn't like about it was that Tea and Yugi just started to fuck like rabbits. The ending was psycodelic and very fucked up. Try again please! I'm sorry for being a little harsh, but you should learn from your mistakes. Better Luck Next Time!
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Reviewed By: cahos mage On: November 30, 2003 15:08 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10 Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review: it was a littel short for my taste. but i think you got to the action a littel to quiqly i mean try to work it up to the big scean you know.
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Reviewed By: R_Winner [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 03:23 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10 Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review: Be thankfull I didn't lower my rating any more! THAT WAS POINTLESS! WHERE IS YOUR FUCKING PLOT! I'm sorry but the only thing that made your story worth while was the fact that Bakura didn't die! |
Reviewed By: Relinquished666 On: June 10, 2003 22:26 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10 Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review: That was really pointless. There was no story. The charecters had sex for no reason, and you also didn't go into any detail. Also, why did you kill off all the charecters for no reason at all? |
Reviewed By: funkywinkerbean On: December 30, 2002 10:40 CST Comment/Review: hahahaha that is sooooooo funny write more, and make it a tiny bit more insane. |