| "Ready to Run" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: chichichick On: January 27, 2003 15:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! i love your story i can nto wait till your next chap!!!! Keep up the good work!! |
Reviewed By: DBZChicky501 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2003 17:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mwahaha! Found it!! ^^ Man, ff.net is being a real arse lately! dahamn! He's marrying Marron? That can't be right... but he wants to find Pan! I don't get it! LOL, maybe there's nothing TO get! ^^ Ack, anyways, found your fic (horay!) Update soon! |
Reviewed By: Makaveli On: January 01, 2003 00:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Total coolios! The only problem I see here is with Marron acting the way she is...I really don't think any of the DBZ girlz act like that...but! This is also a very good fic and I like it! Please continue!
On a side note, FFN is a very good place to get reviews, as opposed to MMO, simply 'cause more people go to FFN. Just thought I would let ya know ^^ |
Reviewed By: petite_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2002 20:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Me: TRUNKS DON'T MARRY MARRON! SHE'S A DOUBLE-CROSSING BITCH! OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! *SMACK!*
Trunks: 0_o She ran right into the wall...
Me: *wakes up* Your fic is awesome Moon Pryncess! I can't belive no one reviewed before me! It SOOO reminds me of Cinderella!...But MUCH sadder...*sob*
Trunks: Marron you're soooo beautiful
Me: SHUT UP! SHUT UP! SHUT UP! SHUT UP! SHUT UP! SHUT UP! SHUT UP! SHUT UP! *passes out from loss of oxygen* |
Reviewed By: MoonPyncess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2002 17:58 CST
Comment/Review:
Sorry about the review below, it was just a tester! Hehe, I'm not that cocky! But I would like it if people reviewed this story! |
Reviewed By: MoonPyncess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2002 17:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Cute comedy fic! I like it a lot! Marron is such a bitch! Moving in on Trunks like that! What the hell is her problem? Pan needs to get back home, now!!! ACCKK! Update soon! |
Reviewed By: petite_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2003 20:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, yeah! Oh, yeah! It's my birthday! It's my birthday! Trunks is not marring Marron! It's my birthday! Oh yeah! It's my birthday!... |
