| "Trouble" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2006 07:58 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This was a fun story. nice job.
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Reviewed By: chidogs [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2005 11:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dang, this one made me hurt myself it was so funny and hot at the same time. Particularly Vegeta's definition of the holiday. Along with throngs of others, I will never see a candy cane again in the same way. And I really loved Bulma and ChiChi and their reactions to the situation. Awesome stuff. So much fun. You must really love these characters to write them so spot on.
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Reviewed By: Goku's Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2003 09:35 CST
Comment/Review:
i really enjoyed reading your story!
nice work!! |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2003 23:04 CST
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I've read this story about 15 times... no really I have. And it just keeps getting better and better each time I do :) Its a good pick me up for those shitty nights. makes my tummy full of flutterbyes ;) I coudn't find one thing wrong in the whole story. Everyone was in character, your lemon was FANTASTIC... not vulgar at all like a lot of those yaoi I've read. It was tasteful, but still exciting :) Thumbs up to you my dear! |
Reviewed By: Dark Serapha [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2003 05:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another story of my favourite author and I didn't see it sooner! I am SO ashamed! Well, well, you have just NO idea how much I envy you americans for christmas ornamental candy canes right now. This is not a common decoration on german christmas trees and when I tried to think of a substitute, glass balls, wooden apples and chandles were a possible solution, some even proofed some kind of naughty possibilities, but it just doesn't sound RIGHT.
*goes all hot and giddy imagining what other things Vejita could do with a candy cane...
This was awesome and I thank you for a VERY delightful read, dear Xero, once again.
I remain your fathful fan and truly amazed half fallen angel
Dark Serapha |
Reviewed By: POAS [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2003 20:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very funny I love the story!! |
Reviewed By: Namek Kaia [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2003 05:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to admit, that after reading the first chapter, I got a little skeptical. My initial thoughts were that the first chapter was going to be wonderful (which is was... very well written) and then when we got down to the hentai scene, it would all turn to crap like a lot of other stories I've read do. Wrong and REALLY REALLY wrong!! The second chapter of this has to be one of the most amazing chapters I've ever read. It was adorable beyond all reason, the way you had Vegeta torture Goku, and how Bulma helped them out a bit. Then hunt idea was very exciting. And the "cottage" angle... CLASSIC! The furs were a very nice touch along with the explanation about WHY they were together. And the sex... GODS was that outstanding! Perfectly written. All us hentai writers should aspire to such work as this! And Vegeta's perception of Christmas had me ROLLIN'!! It's 5 in the morning and here I am trying not to wake people from their sleep. Hilarious! I also loved how you ended it. You displayed Chi Chi as conservative as she probably is without being offensive to her character. What aren't you good at? This has got humor, passion, and drama (kinda) all in one! An amazing piece of work all in all. The 10 degrades this... it deserves way more. Keep writing!! |
Reviewed By: christabel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2002 22:37 CST
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I loved it. I am never going to be able to lick a candy cane again without thinking about Veggie. |
Reviewed By: AMCM74 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2002 21:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ilove your style! I just am going to have to invest in a pair of glasses. I ended up eating the screen in every fic of yours I read!! I mean it! I never realize how close I am til my head hits the DAMN GLASS! No other author does that to me!
I caught the part where ChiChi says he was always loyal... unless he was dead ^_^ I want to know more about that one .... |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2002 18:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was good I liked it |
Reviewed By: Lauryn [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2002 21:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My goodness... Merry Christmas indeed! I have to say, Xero, this is certainly the BEST holiday fanfic I've ever read. Though most your fanfics fall under the 'best' category :) Fantastic job! I can never get enough of your work :) *claps* Bravo! |
