"Ante Up!" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Reviewed By: foxtale3 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2008 02:43 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: That was absolutely hilarious!! I loved the set up for the story and how the last line tied everything together. How great it would have been to be in Relena's shoes that night! Lol!
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Title: Ante Up! Reviewed By: Plyric [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2008 15:20 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: O M G! By far and above, I am STILL LMAOROFL!!!! This is a FANTASTICALLY written story! Extremely well-written, highly creative plot told in a wonderful spin! Excellent grammar, spelling, and perfect story-flow! Not to mention the non-stop laugh-a-rama for the entire last half of the story! OMG, her hair clip! ROYAL LMAOROFL!!!! And Heero's "little" surprise at the end, spectacular! Then, of course, she's all calm and like, "let's just get this on..." One-way trip to my favorites, permanently! Stupendous job! BRAVO!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kanto The Slayer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2007 07:13 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Isn't Relena just the smartest thing? Proof of losing the battle and yet winning the war. Excellent writing. This fic has recieved the K.T.S. Seal of Awesomeness.
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Reviewed By: thyme_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2005 01:20 CDT Comment/Review: Hm, yummy. Thanks, that was a lot of fun! I liked that everyone seemed really in character to me and I enjoyed their casual interactions, wee! (It is after 2am, so this review may be a little silly, sorry)
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Reviewed By: vivophoenix On: June 09, 2005 21:54 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: this was tone of the best i've ever read. proper grammer and spelling. original material. not trite. descriptive but not too much and just fun domino145@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: Sally Taylor On: October 23, 2003 18:29 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: It's a pitty I only had ten out of ten for I would give a twenty!! Geezz I loved it, it was the best one shot I've read in my very long life!! Beautiful! Congratulations, you are in my favourites list now!
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Reviewed By: Amy the Yu On: March 08, 2003 23:35 CST Comment/Review: That was great. XD Hahahaha!!!
It's always fun to see the non-"spoiled lil' princess" side to Relena. ^_^ She just pure rocked here. Ooo...I hope none of my GW loving friends ever find out I think Relena's cool when she's not whining, or I'm so in for a good beating.
BTW, I nearly went insane thinking that you weren't going to use the ponytail as a credit. Now, if her ponytail always had at least two elastics like mines, she wouldn't even have had to unclasp her bra. Or if she had a clasp on the back...those usually have two hooks. ^_^;;
I'd want to go play strip poker w/ my friends now, but God knows I suck at poker. Now if it was a game of Cheat or Crazy 8s...>_ |
Reviewed By: Anya L. On: March 08, 2003 21:36 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I've never had the urge to play poker until now...I think I'll go learn right away. Or better yet, learn to cheat at poker. |
Reviewed By: Jace On: March 08, 2003 21:09 CST Comment/Review: Naughty! Naughty! Naughty! I know I liked it. =P |
Reviewed By: Perry D. On: March 08, 2003 20:40 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I have to read this over and over again! Hell, I'm going to read all your stories. Totally hooked. |
Reviewed By: Dodd On: March 08, 2003 18:28 CST Comment/Review: More! Sequel or another story, just do another one was wonderful as this. |
Reviewed By: sailor michi On: March 08, 2003 17:55 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Too, too funny. And Duo and Wufei are perverts, especially Duo. Your humor is off the wall. |
Reviewed By: Carolyn M. On: March 08, 2003 12:53 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Scandulous! I need more. That was hilarious and hentai and off the hook wonderful. Definitely keep writing. Man, that was good. |
Reviewed By: dragonlady sakura On: February 21, 2003 22:52 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Can you do a sequel? PLEASE! With sugar on top! |
Reviewed By: dragonlady sakura On: February 21, 2003 22:52 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Go Heero! Go Relena! I'm so interested in poker now. -_~ |
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