| "Of Heaven and Hell" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Foxyroxy15@aol.com On: November 26, 2004 18:38 CST
Comment/Review:
Okay why Have you not update I love this story I want to know wat happen next come on update plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz!!!!
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Reviewed By: melanie On: March 09, 2003 11:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok well i mean maybe Darien could like be the real Tuxedo mask and be the real person Sailor moon marrys.By the way what does Darien look like?I mean in this story?But i LOVE THE STORY ANYWAYS!!!!1~_~ |
Reviewed By: iceangel On: March 05, 2003 16:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this. It's awsome. I have never thought that something like this could be done but you pull it off very nicely. |
Reviewed By: janna [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2003 04:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi
this is good
i do not unsually like these types of stories
because of the taboo subjects,but you do
a nice job of doing it right,beacuse the fake
mamour was rasied in hell he dose not know
what he he dose is wrong and serena become beryl
was differnt.
okay i have some suggestions
did lucifer get hold of mamour the real one
when he was six when his parents died, and the
somewhat differnt aspect of hell made endy come
out when he was child. did lucfier have an affair
with endymion mother back in the sliver millium, and endy was the result.
so far you have done the taboo subject corretly
and not overdone,
thank you
janna |
Reviewed By: lito On: March 05, 2003 16:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very nice. I love it please up date soon. |
Reviewed By: L.O.S.S. On: February 12, 2003 15:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is interesting and I can not wait to see what you come up with next. Well done. |
Reviewed By: Arch Angel On: February 13, 2003 07:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic!!!! I've spent the last ... I dunno, however it took me to read what you've got posted - chuckling silently to myself. And now the people I sit next to in computer class think I'm insane! Oh, well, they would have found that out anyway. This is SOOOOOO great, I can't wait to read the rest!!!! |
Reviewed By: adb [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2003 17:48 CST
Comment/Review:
I have come to hate most Usa?Mamoru pairings.... but this one has marit. keep going. |
