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| "The Invasion" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: mylittleunderground [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2008 01:31 CDT
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It's really cool how you came back to this fanfic after all those years. My fanfics are not yet old enough to be looked back on as yours. As for if you should continue, it is ultimately your decision. If you were to continue, I don't think you should write in the same style you did when you originally wrote it. You should write in the style you have now. It might not add unity to the story, but you'd have an easier time writing it. But again. It's up to you if you really want to continue this.
| Reviewed By: KaibaGirl (member...but too lazy to sign in...^^;;) On: September 24, 2004 23:30 CDT
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KaibaGirl:Finally, you updated!! Now, update again, or I'll be forced to...um...injure you! Seto: Oh yeah, because your 5'3", 90 pound frame is just so intimidating. ::rolls eyes:: KG: You shut up. Seto: Make me. KG: That's it, you get the collar again! ::snaps a dog collar around his neck and drags him away:: Seto: Goddamnit...I hate the collar.
| Reviewed By: Shadow2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2003 20:54 CST
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LMAO | Reviewed By: Kari On: January 05, 2003 16:17 CST
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Kari:Write more or I'll shoot you're a$$ off with my nice shiny gun.
Weevil: I like big bugs and i cannot lie! You other buggers can't deny...
Kari: Where the heck you come from?
Yami: *mutters under breath* Mars...
Weevil: I heard that! Die!!!* pulls out squirt gun* heh heh... oops...
Yami: MIND CRUSH!!!
Weevil: *falls down big black hole and joins Tea, Barney, and the Teletubbies* Oh no.
Barney: I f*$% you, you f*$% me, we're a f*$%&^# family...
Weevil: Curse you Yami Yugi!!!
Yami: MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!
Kari: *sweatdrops* where did that come from?
Yugi: Mars...
Kari: Not again... | Reviewed By: IAMINSANE On: January 03, 2003 22:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is totally genius. And I did laugh my ass off, thank you very much. PLEASE write more, or I might explode. I really liked the editor jokes.
-IAMINSANE
PS-Nice shiny gun... |
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