| "The Darkness Within" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: kamehameha_roshi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2003 07:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my Dende, that was so... touching?? Um I dont know the right word to use!! WOW that was GREAT! I really like this fic!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!! |
Reviewed By: Xero Sky [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2003 01:14 CST
Comment/Review:
You can't leave us there!!! MORE MORE MORE!!!!
This is a wonderful fic, and I really admire not only your writing skills, but Azurite's translation skills. |
Reviewed By: QueenSaiyan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2003 19:57 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You two have done a great job with translating this to English, I must say. ^_^ I was just thinking that seeing Vegeta in such a new light must have triggered the realisation of Goku's feelings for him. But still! Hentai Goku, taking advantage of our poor little Prince like that! (I'd love to see more ~.^) |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2003 23:11 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is so good, that is al i can say |
Reviewed By: kamehameha_roshi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2003 09:16 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow nice fic! You 2 are doing a really good job with this, even going to the trouble to translate it and alL!! Well done! Oh and thanx for taking that trouble, I really like this fic!! Please keep up the good work!! |
Reviewed By: Xero Sky On: January 07, 2003 23:29 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
More, please, and very soon!! There is something very compelling about this fic, and I absolutely love the kiss at the end of the 2nd chapter. |
Reviewed By: Roshy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2003 20:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic is great, I like how its coming along, its very good. ^^ -luv Roshy- |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2003 17:53 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is an awsome fan fic. belive me this is good keep up the work. |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2003 02:43 CST
Comment/Review:
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE NOW! NOOOOOOOOOOOOW!
*cough*
It is awe-staggering how IC this fic is... It's a seamless blend from the show & manga we love into something more. Really. This could be canon. No OOC anywhere, not a trace. 100% natural progression.
Have I flattered you into uploading the next parts yet? ;)
Alithiel would be very happy, I think. |
Reviewed By: Becka-chan On: January 01, 2003 22:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I started reading and I could not bring myself to stop. I'm REALLY interested in this fic, so please update soon.
-^__^- |
Reviewed By: Chibi Gemi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2003 21:46 CST
Comment/Review:
Hello!
I've read this story on FF.net, but i just read it again and i still love it!
I went to check out the honor you mentioned, and I loved the story by Alithiel. But, I was wondering, what happened to her? I'd like to pay my own respects to such a wonderful author and artists. How did she pass on?
I appriciate your time on this delicate topic.
Domo Arigato.
-Chibi Gemi aka Gemini Stampede |
Reviewed By: vinn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2003 19:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey just thought i would give you a review here as well a an e-mail
i just love g/v's (mmmmmmmm)
damm i reckon i gonna love this fic
so write like the wind and rock on |
Reviewed By: Winged Revenge On: January 01, 2003 16:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi!! You used to post this on FF.net didn't you ^_^ I loved it then and I love it now!! This is the one that is supposed to be LOONG isn't it? ^_^ *is a sucker for epics and Goku/Vegeta pairings and coffee... lots of coffee @_@* *drools*
I've only seen three of the chapters and I LOVE THEM ALL!! This is just a VERY fascinating story and I advise everyone to read and review it ^_^
So keep going and keep updating!! I'll certainly review if you do ^_^ |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2003 14:31 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is very good and I'm sorry to hear at about that. Keep this up Ill keep reading it |
Reviewed By: catgurl On: January 08, 2003 19:39 CST
Comment/Review:
"Shadows of the Past" was also one of the most original and wonderful stories I have ever seen. How did she pass on? I too would like to pay my respects to her and her inspiring story, thank so so much. |
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