| "The Darkness Within" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: thePrincesJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2004 23:38 CST
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I need to learn German to read the rest, don't I, Sephfy?
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Reviewed By: PiccoloLover#? On: April 05, 2004 20:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! I love this story!!! As a matter of fact, I love all your stories!!! Keep writing -- I have to know what happens!!!
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Reviewed By: LemonEGoodness [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2003 03:05 CDT
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PleasepleasepleasepleasePleasepleasepleasepleasePleasepleasepleasepleasePleasepleasepleasepleasePleasepleasepleasepleasePleasepleasepleasepleasePleasepleasepleasepleasePleasepleasepleasepleasePleasepleasepleasepleasePleasepleasepleaseplease update soon!
I love this fic so much Don't make me have to go out and learn german to read the rest! |
Reviewed By: Zorella [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2003 09:30 CST
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I was going to read this a while back, but after what happened.... well yeah, I'm here now.
Anyways, I got to the end of chappie three...agh. Damn awful cliff hanger *grumbles* I'll be back. |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2003 19:09 CST
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oooo... i really like this... please update soon :( |
Reviewed By: fluffygcfh On: January 18, 2003 23:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is an absolutly wonderful fic, I cannot wait to read more, I especially loved the end of chapter three and I cannot wait to read more. |
Reviewed By: punker182biatch [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2003 22:52 CST
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*mouth gapes open* ...evil... EVIL! No cliffhangers!!! It's like reading a book u can't put down, and then figuring out at the most climactic point that THE REST OF THE BOOK IS BLANK!! ARG!!! Update again soon! |
Reviewed By: Kikoro On: January 17, 2003 12:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow wow wow! This is a great fic. I love how you keep everyone in character, thats very hard to do. I can't wait for you to translate the other chapters, translate them soon, onegai! |
Reviewed By: kamehameha_roshi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2003 07:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my Dende, that was so... touching?? Um I dont know the right word to use!! WOW that was GREAT! I really like this fic!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!! |
Reviewed By: Xero Sky [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2003 01:14 CST
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You can't leave us there!!! MORE MORE MORE!!!!
This is a wonderful fic, and I really admire not only your writing skills, but Azurite's translation skills. |
Reviewed By: QueenSaiyan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2003 19:57 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You two have done a great job with translating this to English, I must say. ^_^ I was just thinking that seeing Vegeta in such a new light must have triggered the realisation of Goku's feelings for him. But still! Hentai Goku, taking advantage of our poor little Prince like that! (I'd love to see more ~.^) |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2003 23:11 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is so good, that is al i can say |
Reviewed By: kamehameha_roshi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2003 09:16 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow nice fic! You 2 are doing a really good job with this, even going to the trouble to translate it and alL!! Well done! Oh and thanx for taking that trouble, I really like this fic!! Please keep up the good work!! |
Reviewed By: Xero Sky On: January 07, 2003 23:29 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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More, please, and very soon!! There is something very compelling about this fic, and I absolutely love the kiss at the end of the 2nd chapter. |
Reviewed By: Roshy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2003 20:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic is great, I like how its coming along, its very good. ^^ -luv Roshy- |
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