| "A Welcome Burden" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Dina On: February 18, 2004 15:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. That's really I have to say. Your writing is amazing. I think this is the best Yaoi fanfic I've ever read! Keep up the good work. please!
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: Mad Scientist Mei On: December 06, 2003 22:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Before I start ranting and raving on what a absolutely great fic this was I have something to say about To-ya's comment. That fact that Sephiroth was never portrayed as an uke makes you intrigued to read it, when I knew Sephiroth was going to be the uke, I got excited because I had never read a Sephy-uke story. Also, people can change, hell, Sephiroth is practically mako-poisoned and we all know how screwed up Cloud was afterwards. Therefore leaving the possibility for anything. As they also said about personality, obviously they weren't paying attention to the 'voices' in the back of Sephiroth's head saying he shouldn't "make noises" as not to be weak in appearance. But I don't know..I guess Iwas little outraged by his comment. This is a great story, the way you described Cloud's development since Meteor was very well done. The different point of views is also a major plus, a new flavor if you will. Awesome job. Keep up the good work! E-mail me if you make more FF Fics! -mei tastypoizon@aol.com
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Reviewed By: GothGoddess On: September 28, 2003 14:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwww...that was sooo sweet! And original. I've never seen Seph as an uke before. You have a lot of talent. You write beautifully. I loved it!
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Reviewed By: Kai On: March 04, 2003 22:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Awww...that's so beautiful! I feel all happy and mushy now. Although, in Sephiroth's since you talked about him being cold in the beginning, wouldn't it be logical to have him be warm at the end? Just an idea, really enjoyed this fic. Really. |
Reviewed By: olio On: February 27, 2003 11:01 CST
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I like your fictions, especially 'A welcome burden' both Cloud and Sephy's POV's. Love them, keep up the good work!!! |
Reviewed By: Sailor Sun Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2003 10:00 CST
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yaaay!!! i lovveeee seeing sephiroth as an uke... to anyone. it's just different, and i like different things, lol. i'm always looking for them, so i am content... for a while *grins* |
Reviewed By: Arithkenshin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2003 18:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
9's because i always believe there is room for improvement, but then you know that hon *hugs*
I love this story, always have and always will. It is nice and refreshing to see someone else use their unique interpretation of things to create an excellent fic.
I personally sick of reading fics that are always only seen from one point of view. There are sides to a characters personality, from their experiences, past and present that go into making them a very complex being. From the way he was raised and trained I find your interpretation of Sephiroth very probably and extremely close to my own; especially after being so close to death as this fic finds him.
Your style of writing is, as always, a pleasure to read and I hope you continue to do so.
~Arith |
Reviewed By: To-ya On: February 13, 2003 12:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was well-written in terms of convention, and the reason I gave it a ten for originality is that I've never seen Sephiroth written as an uke...but it was so out of character! Sephiroth was acting like a hormonal teenager; even IF he's never been in love before, he's still a confident, mature individual, and certainly not an uke to Cloud! Maybe to Zax--but NOT Cloud. Cloud has too much of a hero-worship view of Sephiroth. If the names had been reversed, it ALMOST would have worked...at any rate, you've got a nice style, but PLEASE give a little more thought to the characters' personalities next time! |
Reviewed By: mtlxiaoangel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2003 17:10 CST
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wow! this was a good ficcy!! i liked it! if you keep em coming, email me! xoEnchantedAngelxo@yahoo.com
mtlxiaoangel aka Enchanted Angel |
Reviewed By: Squall-sama On: January 02, 2003 19:58 CST
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=^_^= Hi!!! i'm so happy you found this place... after the whole ff.net incident i was so worried everybody would be lost and i'd miss out on good fics! glad you're here! yummy fics! love 'em! |
