| "Pharoah" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Red Dragon of Egypt On: August 09, 2003 08:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
RD: hey red here um now to finish with the presents*looks into the same bag as before*ok now yugi gets lets see a pearl crystal staff that can turn into anything he wants from wepons to kill anzu to sexy outfits for yami and himself and torture things for seto and bakura and lets see oh and Yami gets a staff to but its ruby instead and they bothe get whips all of different elements each with different abbilities and Honda gets hehe sry cant resist a book of a thousand smf one ways to style your hair and bakura he gets hehe another outfit to wear for standing infront of the mirror and Ryou gets the most high tech computer with the strongest MP3 in the world and seto he gets the lates swan lake barbie hehe and um joey gets a new spike collar with a leather outfit with doggy ears and tail to go with it and yami gets to to have a thousand and one ways to take out torture and kill all those who annoy him or threaten his abiou hehe well TTFN TA TA FOR NOW AND GIVE THESE ITEMS TO THE ONES WHO THEY ARE GOING TO THNK U |
Reviewed By: Red Dragon of Egypt On: August 09, 2003 08:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLS PLS PLS PLS PLS PLS PLS WRITE MORE FOR ALL OF THEM I LOVE YOUR FANFICS THEY ARE SO CUTE ESPECIALLY YUGI AND YAMI RIGHT GUYS TO LOVE MY FRIEND OH AND UM ONE OTHER THING THIS IS FOR CHILDHOOD COMEDY FICCY U HAVEi would love it greatly if u were to show um Yugi doing more funy things with yami and the other but no hurting yami pls and as for gifts lets see*takes out a huge red silk drawstring bag filled with preseants for yugi and yami*well for yugi he gets a little white tri colored Drakling named Yami and Yami gets a black tri colored Drakling named Hikari the white one has golden teeth and claws and spindles on its wings the black one has the same except they are all red and ill finish the rest after i send another review |
Reviewed By: Yami and Yugi fan 12 On: February 10, 2003 17:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a good story! Please review soon I want to read what happens the look alike of the pharaoh. More soon please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: yami friend On: February 15, 2003 13:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the story was graet hurry up and update it and i bet the pharoah is yugi and yami is the look alike. |
