"Pitiful" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Roxanne de Winter On: January 02, 2003 21:01 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review: Nice work... you just could've described the torture scene a bit more vividly. It'll make it a lot more heart wrenching (^_^).
XOXOXO,
Roxanne
Font Color | Reviewed By: Ita-chan On: January 02, 2003 03:57 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: *sniff*...that is SOOOOOOO SAAADDD,.....poor heero and duo,....*sniffles*...keep-up the good work,....*waves 1+2 flags*...till next time,....JAAAAAAAA and GAAANBBATEEE-NEEE!!^_~!! |
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