| "Everything Goes Martial Arts" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Caliban On: July 25, 2003 21:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
Made me laugh out loud :). Very snappy dialog, I'd love to see more. Ranma vs Nabiki in a running battle of wits would be something to see, never mind him running rings around Akane for once. |
Reviewed By: SSJGoten [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2003 10:09 CST
Comment/Review:
Great Story, very original, don't kill it yet. |
Reviewed By: Little John of Locksland On: January 04, 2003 13:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story, while you seem to have borrowed ideas from other stories here and there, by and large this story seems to be pretty original in content. I hope you continue this story instead of it dying off now. |
Reviewed By: ShogunZX On: January 02, 2003 20:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...I like stories about Ranma not being a pawn of Genma. And the idea of him not being involved with Happi sounds cool, too.
Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Chi Vayne On: January 02, 2003 20:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the first one that I have read quite like this. It allows for all kinds of options, which is why I don't really care for the "Akane and Ranma are forced into the engagement against their will" (and the same old hit Ranma over the head with the blunt instrument). It's too close to standard. I think you may have had greater flexibility with Ranma engaged to all of them or none of them. I just would be sorry to see it start so well then turn down the same standard path. |
Reviewed By: The LustyChick On: January 02, 2003 19:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Totally cool... original premise... love to see more... a hell of a lot more.
In my opinion its as much fun as one of Metroanime's or Skysabers fanfics, keep up the excellent work |
