Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2003 23:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Session?" By The Offspring!!! *reaches up above her to get the Ignition album from the CD rack on the wall. Omygod, I remember this song!! You get a million Originality/Creativity points just for using this song, Hell yeah!!
My only comment is that this one-shot is short. But considering how "emotionally disressing" it was, I think that was a good thing. *sniffles*
So this is the untold story of how Vegeta and Bulma made Trunks in the Mirai timeline? *sniffles* It was kind of manipulative of her to do what she did at the end (the teasing for the answer) but it fit.
I guess my only suggestion is that more of the song lyrics be used. Like this part:
Some might say it's a fling,
For all I know it don't mean a thing.
Either way I can't complain,
Ain't no strings--
Guess I got it made.
*shrugs* I guess when I was listening to this song over and over I thought of one of their conversations in the beginning.
Well, good going on this one! ^_^ |
