| "Intruder" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: foxtale3 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2008 10:44 CDT
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Such a sweet and wonderful story! Good job as always.
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Reviewed By: Nova of Minkland On: December 02, 2004 14:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought that was wonderfully sweet. I've always been a fan of introspection. The ending was definitely my favorite part. And Paygan was very well done. I laughed quite a few times. I applaud your lack of lemon. It wouldn't have impoved the story and would have stripped it of its warm gentle atmosphere. Loved it, Nova
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Reviewed By: Akira139 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2004 13:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
heero no baka, but thats nothing new. great emotion, i love how heero just hides.you should write a sequal to it about the next day or something.
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Reviewed By: Samuel S. On: February 04, 2003 16:28 CST
Comment/Review:
Don't finish this yet! It's wonderful. |
Reviewed By: Belledandy On: February 02, 2003 00:45 CST
Comment/Review:
Hell, Relena needs to just jump his bones! She gives enough signals even a blind, deaf mute could get. He knows she wants him. He has to get over his angst if they'll ever be together. Men! |
Reviewed By: Marianne Me. On: February 01, 2003 19:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope you continue this. I personaly think Relena needs to tell Heero if he's going to check in on her at night he's gotta stay..the night. He'd probably pee in his pants. Jokes! |
Reviewed By: Jason On: January 16, 2003 19:55 CST
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What a sweet, STRANGE couple. Love all of your stories. |
Reviewed By: Kima On: January 09, 2003 23:34 CST
Comment/Review:
Well written. Heero and Relena have problems! They're made for each other! ^O^ |
Reviewed By: Mina On: January 05, 2003 10:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heero is such a baka. He loves the girl, but is too hung up on his past. Relena needs to curse him out and tell him she doesn't care about his past. That if he doesn't hurry up and make a decision, she's done with him forever. |
Reviewed By: EVE On: January 04, 2003 10:41 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SWEET! If you ask me, they both stalk each other. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Taboo On: January 04, 2003 10:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wondefful fic! I love this couple so much and how Heero is always watching out for her. |
