| "Destiny Predetermined" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Amy_Rose(not logged in yet) On: April 25, 2005 06:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
is it possible to make the chapters a little longer? just asking. i like the story though. update soon plz.
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Reviewed By: Millenia [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2003 15:56 CST
Comment/Review:
Don't leave me here keep going I like it alot! |
Reviewed By: Ms. Prongs [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2003 14:43 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Eyes widen fearfully*
How can you just leave it there!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is really good.
I'm going around trying to find all the "In Egypt" stories I can possibly find, and read em, so that I know whether or not I'm taking ideas for the one that I'm writing.
This is just brilliant and I can't wait for more to come out..
I wonder how you work the fave's thingie here...
*Blinks*
Anyways, congradulations on a brilliant story and I hope mine turns out somewhat as good as yours.
^_^
Keep it up!
I got my O.o eye on you!
(That is the lamest thing I've ever come up with..but give a little leeway and you see what a nutcase can do in a review...)
Uh.
Yah.
*waves* |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber On: January 04, 2003 21:36 CST
Comment/Review:
This sounds interesting so far. Could you maybe make the chapters a little longer in the future? They're a little short so far. I'll look forward to another chapter. |
Reviewed By: Karadaki On: January 04, 2003 16:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOLY CRAP, THIS IS SO KOOL!!!!! YAY!!!!!!!! SHAA-LA!!!!! ME LIKE IT VERY MUCH, WRITE MORE, WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!! |
