| "Yu-Gi-Oh: Li'l Hentai Stories" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Title: waii!!!!!
Reviewed By: dm10 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2004 15:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
um can you please do a malik/mokuba ficcie? i would love you forever!
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Reviewed By: Velvetina [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2004 15:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
i've just read both chapters and there were hot, four suggestions u can continue the first chapter so Marik/Bakura, Continue chapter two with Jou/ Yugi Continue that suggestion with Jou/Yugi/Yami Lastly purely for my own twisted fantasies (tee hee) could you do a Kaiba/Yami for me? i've got loads but i dn't wanna be demanding lol
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Reviewed By: Moutogurl On: February 24, 2004 17:51 CST
Comment/Review:
Mog: HEHE!!! LUVED LUVED!! Moutogurl: oh god Mog: Mia/Yugi!! Moutogurl: No My Yugi Mog: Mine!! *Mouto Gurl slams Mog's head into computer screen* Moutogurl: Ha...I win... Oh and Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: Nine Tailed Fox On: January 27, 2004 15:06 CST
Comment/Review:
Squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee- NTF: We get the point. *Turns to author* Sorry 'bout that! She's kinda perverty... But, I has to agree with the 'Squeee'. Very nice.
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Reviewed By: yah-sha On: November 12, 2003 18:02 CST
Comment/Review:
YumiaSUGAR WEEE mey does my hairki always have to be on a sugar high Yumaibecause you are so lucky meoh ya lucky me..... YumaiYEP ^_^ mewell ne way we both loved your story plz continue we would like to see a yami bakura/ryou/yami/yugi four some plz Yumaiyep THANKIES *runns into wall and gets knocked out meOH THANK YOU RA!!!!
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Reviewed By: Scarlett Ding On: August 07, 2003 05:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwwsome!!! ^-^
I just read both chapters & they're GREAT!
U don't hav 2, but I kinda whana read some Mia\Anzu "action" between them. =^-^=
If not Duke\Yugi iz very possible 2!!
I havn't bumpt in 2 any fics on those 2 yet, so I'm hope'n you'll write 1 up.
I just now thought those 2 up.
( U ask'd me 2 think up a weird pair & I DID!!!!)
SO there u hav it! Out of my curiousity (I don't know if I wrote that correctly... probably not. ^_^') I've given u opional pairs.
In the mean time write some more!!!
YEEEEEAAAAAHHH, YUGI & YAMI RULE!!!! YEEEAAAAAAAAHHHHHH, WWHHHH0000000OOOOOOOOOooooooo *cheering slowly dies away* ._.
Anyways...(^-^')what I meant 2 say iz,
"BYE! Read'ga later!!!" ^-^ |
Reviewed By: purplechaos04 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2003 14:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yay for you!!!!!! I think someone already mentioned it, but I'd love to see a Yami Bakura/ Malik lemon. You could even have it be a continuation of Chapter One. |
Reviewed By: ElderWhisp [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2003 23:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
Can say I've never seen a Seto/Malik (can you make it Marik instead? Pwease?) lemon. |
Reviewed By: fun5679206@aol.com On: June 06, 2003 09:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'd Suggest That maybe After You Finish Competing The Yugi/Jounouchi Part, Then You Could Make A Whole Yami/Yugi/Jounouchi Threesome Chapter. But That's Just My Sugestion!!:-) |
Reviewed By: Anon On: May 11, 2003 00:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Delicious. |
Reviewed By: KC On: April 26, 2003 14:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
um, you should put in a Joey/Yugi story you know? After the thing you just had with Joey/Yami thingy, so why not? |
Reviewed By: KC On: April 26, 2003 14:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
um, you should put in a Joey/Yugi story you know? After the thing you just had with Joey/Yami thingy, so why not? |
Reviewed By: ssjztrunks On: March 09, 2003 17:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEAZE I AM BEGGING YOU DO A MALIK AND YAMI BAKURA PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZpuppy dog eye |
Reviewed By: shadow_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2003 17:15 CST
Comment/Review:
O_o
sara:my eyes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
me:oh quiet
sara:*continues conplaining*
me *sighs*im goona regret this*turns to other people*im straight okay dont be getiing ideas!!!and because it will shut her up*kisses sara passionatley*
sara:O_O
me:uhhhhhhhh...umm...write more pwease bye!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: shadow_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2003 17:08 CST
Comment/Review:
0_o
sara: my eyes they burn!!!!!!!!!
me:oh comeon sara you know you liked the story*evil smirk*
sara:well i dont!
me:then i will make you mwhahahhahahaha*pins sarah down and kisses her*
sara:*blushes*i love it now get off me
me: good
byeeeeeeeeeee oh and write more please
sara:i hate you!!!!!!!!=^_^=
me: dum fox |
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