| "Love deep beneath the snow" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2006 13:16 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This was very interesting.
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Title: great story
Reviewed By: gotensbitch On: September 09, 2003 19:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
One of the best i have ever read keep it up. |
Reviewed By: bebop015 On: August 03, 2003 04:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniffle* that was.....*sniffle* BEAUTIFUL!!!WAAAA!!! YAMCHA YOU BASTARD!!!*another sniffle* please make a sequel or something i wanna know what vegeta going to do to that bastard!! |
Reviewed By: dbzfan On: March 04, 2003 21:24 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh Wow!!! THat was awesome. Me likes, me likes. I liked the flashback too, great idea, and all of it...wonderful. |
Reviewed By: VampireGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2003 16:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That.....was...one..of..the best fics I have EVER read!!! (and thats a whole lot!) It was excellent and..just.....wow!! Great job you are such a talented writer!Write more fics as great as these! |
Reviewed By: Faye89 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2003 18:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great theme to the fic, but the spelling and grammar made it a little hard to follow. For your first fic I think you did rather well. Keep it up. |
Reviewed By: Legana On: January 05, 2003 14:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
I didn't like the fic, it was pretty hard to read and it was confusing. |
Reviewed By: Vampkestrel On: January 05, 2003 02:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*drool* ohhhhhhhhhhh i like ^_^
you should write a sequael where veggie and bulma get revenge on yamcha and linna |
Reviewed By: cherrynat52 On: January 04, 2003 22:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!! That was a really great one-shot. You should consider doing a sequel!!!Awesome fic!! ^_^ |
