Reviewed By: Tobe On: January 15, 2003 16:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I'm just a little confused. You see it started out great with Duo and Quatre getting together, and you learn all about their feeling for one another but feelings for Heero aren't even mentioned. So what I don't understand is how in one chapter it's just those two, then Duo and Heero have a mission and before it Quatre kisses him, well thats ok, but when they get back you called them all lovers and from what I understand all there was time for was just Quatre and Duo. I just don't get how they're all just together all of a sudden. Well anyway, there were a lot of spelling mistakes, but if get someone to edit your work I'm sure you'll do better next time. Keep it up.
Tobe |
