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| "Flight 342, Blue Nation" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: Klara_in_flares On: February 27, 2003 04:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whoohooo!! I LIKE Allen. It is decided. I think it's the black robe that does it. I bet it was silk...
hehe.. ok, i'm back to reality now! A band? coolies! But that girl is keeping alot to herself, isnt she? She seems so hurt... I guess I'll find out why as I read the later chapters.
Intirguing start to ur fic, it asks alot of questions! Yep, I'm very intrigued to know more... So write! whoohooo!
*huggles Allen and lady* love ya lady! Klarie xx | Reviewed By: Mystica [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2003 05:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Umm, okay Bec. It was interesting, but since you've hardly written any, I can't really give you a very high rating. It wasn't terrifically interesting because nothing really happens. But it is interesting, I want to read more!
Please keep posting, and PLEASE read my LOTR fic on ff.net. You owe me! I'm checking daily for updates. | Reviewed By: jillybean [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2003 07:47 CST
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im so clever i guessed who it was!!! anyway ri, superstars of modern love is by GTo, and EVRYONE TAKE NOTE!!!!! BIG W HAVE LEGOLAS FILES!!!!!!!!!!! GOOD PICCIE TOO!!!!! yay! anyway becky, my review for this is in varren's piccy... i kinda got carried away... hehehe | Reviewed By: Fiennaris On: January 06, 2003 08:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic is great, with realastically portrayed characters. I like the scene when Allen's awake (or Allan or... well, I really can't remember which. *resigned sigh* It isn't either of them, is it?) I like the whole black robe/sheet thing. Gives a very sensual mood. The first scene was well done, nie and adrupt to create the mood. I'll probably keep reading this, it's nice, know what I mean, eh? Oh, for a critic's suggestion (and I love these) um, I don't think making this a huge like L.E.M.O.N. thing (take note of the caps) would be very good. P'haps a little teeny lemon hint'd be alright. Just, y'know, in case you were thinking of making it a full blown lemon thing. ^_^ By now you've probably guessed from my writing who I am. So, maybe y'could e-mail me? | Reviewed By: Veresti [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2003 21:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've done an absolutely marvelous job on this chapter. I like it, I like it a lot. I can't wait to see where you go with this lovely piece of fan fiction. ||hugs|| I love you.
Veresti Tristian |
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