| "Miko no Youkai" Reviews/Comments [ 53 ] |
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Reviewed By: razorbld On: January 27, 2003 13:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For a second there, I started to worry when you had Shippo and Kirara got outside. Update! |
Reviewed By: Enigma's Kitten [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2003 00:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I lov this !!!!!!!!!!
OMG I LOV THIS IF I COULD MEET U ID I DONT KNOW
THIS WAS A GREAT STORY AND I I CANT WAIT TO READ THE NEXT ONE !I LOV U
I.M. ME XXDRKANGEL6XX
omg !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: dreambraider On: January 20, 2003 10:12 CST
Comment/Review:
lol keep up the good work.
Hope your story runs away with you.
Have fun and keep writing. |
Reviewed By: Tramp [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2003 13:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NIIIIIICE. Very well done. Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Shorty* On: January 16, 2003 11:44 CST
Comment/Review:
ooo, neat use of Kagome's power. Lovely story. ^-^ |
Reviewed By: sesshoumaru lover On: January 10, 2003 17:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Se-qual,Se-qual,Se-quel.*chating*
Miroko and Sango!
^_~
Good story I give it an
A+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
I would put more but then there would me no more room for other reviews ^_^ |
Reviewed By: brat On: January 10, 2003 16:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the fanfic was very very great |
Reviewed By: Crittle On: January 07, 2003 18:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent! You should write more. Heh...:D |
Reviewed By: Diane On: February 11, 2003 17:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
On this comment of yours from chapter 4, "Kir-ar-a NOT Ki-la-la.. *grumbles about what anime dubs do to names*" Ki-la-la IS the accurate way to say it, they don't have anything similar to our 'r' in Japan so when you see an 'r' in manga it's usually pronounced as 'l', especially in names. I forgot about that until the anime came out so I use Kirara too. Just a little something I picked up somewhere & thought I'd pass on. |
Reviewed By: Onimusha On: February 10, 2003 19:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I very much enjoyed your fic. Every thing about it was very original. You did a great job. Please feel free to look over my fics. I am always interested in what others think.
Please update with new chappie.
-Onimusha- |
Reviewed By: agasa [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2003 23:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic is interesting. I'd like to know where
you got all those japanese words from and how
come you knew how to use them. Anyway great fic I
really enjoyed it can't wait for the sequel |
Reviewed By: claudia67g On: March 09, 2003 14:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say this is a fun fic and i do look forward to seeing more of your work and seeing this story continue ... =D
claudia |
Reviewed By: Diane On: January 19, 2003 13:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This spot should probably be changed or something, "Kagome took his hands in hers and used them to steady herself as she stood on her toes and nibbled his ear." His ears are on top of his head so he would have had to be on his knees or something for her to nibble his ears, she could have nibbled his neck though. |
Reviewed By: ssjprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2003 22:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
Fabulous job on this! I enjoed every minute of the read. I'm left with one word..... MORE!! ^_^
*puts her hands on her hips and stomps her foot* No really! I want more! *pushes your keyboard at you* Get busy, I'm waiting here! :P ^_^ |
Reviewed By: razorbld On: January 06, 2003 14:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sequal time! Miroku and Sango's sex should be wild and glorious^_^ Now that was origional. Kagome first bound their spirits before mating.
Question: How could Inuyasha hump her and suckle at one time? It's phisically impossible... even with a girl your height! And I'm suprised that Inuyasha didn't do it "doggy style." Humans do it that way sometimes too. (more commonly known as freak dancing) |
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