| "Miko no Youkai" Reviews/Comments [ 53 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kaye-Kay On: July 30, 2003 15:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this chapter was great. i was really expecting a kagome/inuyasha chappter again but u surprised me and did a sango an' miroku one. personally i liked them being more nasty. it's better tat way. hey keep up tha good work. can't wait till u get tha next chapter up. hopefully it's gonna be a kagome an' inuyasha one. ::hint:: ::hint:: ^-^ |
Reviewed By: Gemini Maxwell On: July 09, 2003 17:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Nice fic! Update soon! They're all just so cuuuuuuuuute and I love it! Update or FEEL MY WRATH! ~.^ ok, ja ne! |
Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2003 01:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
We have been oh so paticent. Please wake up your muse ( tell them to vacation later ) and update.
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Reviewed By: Yuki On: June 28, 2003 18:30 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have an excellent skill for writing, I can wait to read more, keep up the remarkble work!!! |
Reviewed By: Inu bullet [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2003 17:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
more!!!! story good... making your readers think that you are going to kill off one or more of the characters, bad. I don't know why your comment on the bottom of the page made me think that that is what you are going to do, but it did.
Have Kagome's Grandpa question her about Kagome being Inuyasha's "mate" and what that means... oh, that would be nice and evil...
Oh, yeah, write more. you good. you are the author. don't let them characters try to boss you around. you are in charge of every aspect of their lives. don't forget that. this is one of the greatest glories of being on the keyboard side of the monitor. you are in control.
may the shwartz be with you.
(please take my advice! I've been with you from the start hell, I was your first reviewer. due to a problem with registration, I had to change my name from razorbld to Inu Bullet. Now that I think of it, Inu Bullet suits me better than razor blade, which is what razorbld stands for, due to my great love of all things firearm.)
enough about me, this is about you. your story gets better and better. It's plot is deepening, and the screwing scenes are getting more detailed. the screwing scenes are extremely important. keep it up! |
Reviewed By: MrVampire On: June 19, 2003 19:52 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is a great story. keep up the good work, and update soon please. |
Reviewed By: Inu-kun185 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2003 10:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow! You're really orginal! I've never read a story like this before with Kagome and Inu-Yasha! I really like it and hope you update soon! |
Reviewed By: Rae-chan On: June 04, 2003 20:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One of my fav lemon stories.. can't wait for the next chapter. Also, love the way you use Japanese in the story. For those of us who watch this subbed it's really easy to understand, and you use enough to make it seem realistic while still keeping the flow of the story. Good job! |
Reviewed By: Lor [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2003 22:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love your fic i haven't really seen one like it you have some new stuff and i've read a lot of fics lol update soon |
Reviewed By: Arsenal On: March 07, 2003 15:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is good definetly on my top 10 list.
I like Kagomes miko abilities this seems to be one of the only stories that puts a little more to them than just putting it into an arrow or something. |
Reviewed By: BRONIE BITE On: March 02, 2003 18:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!I LUVED THIS FAN FIC SOOO MUCH!IF U CAN PLEASE E-MAIL ME AT BRONIE BITE@AOL.COM WHEN U GET THE NEXT CHAPTER UP PLEASE^_^.THANK U!AND KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! |
Reviewed By: CreativeJenn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2003 00:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was really good :) |
Reviewed By: Zerianyu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2003 23:34 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey
I love the story but in japan the r's are pronounced with an l sound. LOL just trying to hep well i hope i can read more soon. |
Reviewed By: monkey86 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2003 21:56 CST
Comment/Review:
i love ur fic and i agree with u on the cartoon network crap || i like the manga and subs personally \/ |
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2003 21:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
He he Pregnacy Police I think we need that in america...I really like your story so far...and I have seen worse dubed Anime then Inu-Yasha, but I do like watching it in Japanese better then with the us actors mostly because the names of the Attacks are far better in Jappese ; ) |
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