| "Miko no Youkai" Reviews/Comments [ 53 ] |
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Reviewed By: Crittle On: January 07, 2003 18:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent! You should write more. Heh...:D |
Reviewed By: Diane On: February 11, 2003 17:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
On this comment of yours from chapter 4, "Kir-ar-a NOT Ki-la-la.. *grumbles about what anime dubs do to names*" Ki-la-la IS the accurate way to say it, they don't have anything similar to our 'r' in Japan so when you see an 'r' in manga it's usually pronounced as 'l', especially in names. I forgot about that until the anime came out so I use Kirara too. Just a little something I picked up somewhere & thought I'd pass on. |
Reviewed By: Onimusha On: February 10, 2003 19:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I very much enjoyed your fic. Every thing about it was very original. You did a great job. Please feel free to look over my fics. I am always interested in what others think.
Please update with new chappie.
-Onimusha- |
Reviewed By: agasa [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2003 23:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic is interesting. I'd like to know where
you got all those japanese words from and how
come you knew how to use them. Anyway great fic I
really enjoyed it can't wait for the sequel |
Reviewed By: claudia67g On: March 09, 2003 14:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say this is a fun fic and i do look forward to seeing more of your work and seeing this story continue ... =D
claudia |
Reviewed By: Diane On: January 19, 2003 13:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This spot should probably be changed or something, "Kagome took his hands in hers and used them to steady herself as she stood on her toes and nibbled his ear." His ears are on top of his head so he would have had to be on his knees or something for her to nibble his ears, she could have nibbled his neck though. |
Reviewed By: ssjprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2003 22:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
Fabulous job on this! I enjoed every minute of the read. I'm left with one word..... MORE!! ^_^
*puts her hands on her hips and stomps her foot* No really! I want more! *pushes your keyboard at you* Get busy, I'm waiting here! :P ^_^ |
Reviewed By: razorbld On: January 06, 2003 14:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sequal time! Miroku and Sango's sex should be wild and glorious^_^ Now that was origional. Kagome first bound their spirits before mating.
Question: How could Inuyasha hump her and suckle at one time? It's phisically impossible... even with a girl your height! And I'm suprised that Inuyasha didn't do it "doggy style." Humans do it that way sometimes too. (more commonly known as freak dancing) |
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