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Reviewed By: LYW On: January 31, 2004 12:37 CST
Comment/Review:
An interesting peice of work. I look forward to reading the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: nekochan On: August 10, 2003 23:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Totally unexpected twist. Is Kagome in the future the mother of the snow demon or is it Kikyo? I need to know what's next... also, please dont let poor yasha loose his cute claws... onegai, ceyana-sama!! |
Reviewed By: Bleu On: July 27, 2003 01:54 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I read this a while, but I thought it was great and I would like if you would continue the story. |
Reviewed By: Bleu On: July 27, 2003 01:54 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I read this a while, but I thought it was great and I would like if you would continue the story. |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2003 18:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*looks around, paranoid that she's being watched* Who... me?? *sniffles* I feel so wanted! ^_^
*blinks because that chapter had a lot to take in* Searing heat and biting cold. Poor Inuyasha. I hope his frosbite heals soon, somehow. When it's black, doctors have been known to sever the affected area. *gulp* O.O
That boy... he was so gentle with her (moving the strand of hair)... It's so contrasting to his icy exterior-- kind of like a romantic Inuyasha or his human form. *heh* And the laugh... so unexpected. *grins* I'm SO glad he's as innocent as he looks-- well, as innocent as an ice kid/demon with hollow eyes can be.
“But when I saw who I was sent out for I couldn't do it. I couldn't let him have her again.”
*heart melts* You poor, Kagome freezing kid...
*thinks about his words before*
“If you truly cared for the woman you would have let her die”
And then the almighty bombsell:
“Yeah. That girl looks exactly like my mother.”
*gapes at his final, soul searing words* Then... living with this kid's dad must be Hell and the boy would rather she was dead than with the dad!!! O.O
I'm glad Inuyasha's mind is clear... because mine isn't. (honestly, I hope he didn't mean she looked like Kikyo *sweatdrops* To me, they look NOthing alike!)
Why'd you leave me there?? I need MORE!! *lol* Sorry for giving away the whole plot in this review, but I just couldn't... NOT talk about those words. They were so powerful...
*sigh* I feel... bad for that kid. (what does "Shikai" mean?) If his father is as evil as I feel like he might be, then no wonder the boy's spirit became hardened, frozen like ice.
*imagines tears that can freeze you at a simple touch instead of coat you in warmth-- sniffles* Write more! |
Reviewed By: Amanda a.k.a. Kazk [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2003 09:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are evil, how can you just leave the story off there. I have to say, you deserve every hit you have. I have little doubt that if you continue this you will make it in the top 5 InuYasha fics. Isn't it fun to jut write it as you post it so that you can stop whever you want. If there was something beyond perfect, this would be it.
~Amanda a.k.a. Kazk |
Reviewed By: dxgirly2 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2003 22:38 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was great!! But it soooooo left me hanging!!!! I'm dying to know whats gonna happen next!!! Please try to update soon....lol....maybe I should be giving that advice to myself..... |
Reviewed By: TrunksChick19 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2003 15:49 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WRITE MORE PLEASE!!!!!! Its a great fic!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2003 21:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*feels her body temperature rise* ... is it getting hot in here, or is just me? *chuckles* Damn, I'm all hot-and-bothered. *lol*
Seriously, this chapter was so detailed that I could almost feel the warmth. (*blinks* To lie with Inu like THAT... ;)
!!! Snowflake is THERE!?!?! Oh shit... so what's his motivation, anyway? WHY does he want her to die and think that if Inuyasha loved her then he'd let her die. This is BULLS*#$!!!
Umm... what I REALLY want to say to you, Ceyana, is ...
*singing*
"You give me fever.
Fever... when you touch me.
Fever when you hold me tight.
Fever ... when you kiss me.
Fever all through the night.
You give me fever."
*realizes she's an idiot who doesn't know the words, but thought she had to tell you anway*
Well, that's all from me for now! (Until you update, that is ;) Keep writing this when you can, and I'll be here to review! ^_~ |
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2003 12:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please don't take so long to update I had almost forgot about this story...its soo good to read |
Reviewed By: Nikki On: February 18, 2003 18:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You did a really great job with this. You're idea is entirely new and very imaginative. I love the way you're playing each scene out, and I'm dying to know what happens next. Please update soon...and keep on writing, you're great at it! |
Reviewed By: CreativeJenn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2003 00:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wholey shiznelly! I looooved your fic...PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon! And guess what? You are added to my favorites...oooh lucky you..lol...eh...Your writing is awesome and you describe everything really good to! You got me so into this. Now I have the urge to kick that snowflakey guys ass!! You deserve 10 out of 10! Whooo! |
Reviewed By: jubilation15 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2003 17:13 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was great....Please write more, I'll be checking :) |
Reviewed By: Yash'sChick On: January 25, 2003 17:07 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story! Please update ASAP! I'm dying to know what will happen next! |
Reviewed By: TigerQueen On: January 20, 2003 18:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Sigh... so lovely and sweet! I'm definitely interested! There are some grammar mistakes *grumble* but that seems to be universal. A couple of things that stuck out -- medieval, not mid-evil, and lay or was lying for the past tense of to lie. Sorry -- I'm picky, I know, but it grumbles my guts to be jerked out of a good story by such small mistakes. Yes, I'm a bitch...but hopefully a helpful bitch, right? Anyway, it's a great read -- lots of fun so far! |
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