| "Chaos" Reviews/Comments [ 27 ] |
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Reviewed By: jubilation15 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2003 17:13 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was great....Please write more, I'll be checking :) |
Reviewed By: Yash'sChick On: January 25, 2003 17:07 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story! Please update ASAP! I'm dying to know what will happen next! |
Reviewed By: TigerQueen On: January 20, 2003 18:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Sigh... so lovely and sweet! I'm definitely interested! There are some grammar mistakes *grumble* but that seems to be universal. A couple of things that stuck out -- medieval, not mid-evil, and lay or was lying for the past tense of to lie. Sorry -- I'm picky, I know, but it grumbles my guts to be jerked out of a good story by such small mistakes. Yes, I'm a bitch...but hopefully a helpful bitch, right? Anyway, it's a great read -- lots of fun so far! |
Reviewed By: Pucca On: January 19, 2003 21:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man I'm so close to tears *sniffle* when Inuyasha and Kaede were talking and he said he did love her, I thought you did that perfect! I can't wait for the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: Raven Girl On: January 19, 2003 02:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Drool Drool Drool* more pleeeeeseeeeeeeeeeeee |
Reviewed By: Cataluna [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2003 00:37 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is getting pretty interesting. I hope you'll update soon. |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2003 21:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Reason for rating?? PerfectPerfectPerfectPerfectPerfect!!!
*shivers* "Snowflake" sounded eerily beautiful and captivating ... and then his touch did so much. So sad. An ice demon that curses the hearts of humans ... I pity him very much. He was probably born with a heart of ice ... and therefore knows nothing more than the cold. *sniff*
Uhh....sorry for getting all heavy like that. -_- I just wanted to say that I'm really liking this story so far . . . I can't WAIT to see what happens when Kagome wakes up!!! :)
Oh...would it be a problem for you to email me (duonotsuin@yahoo.com) when you update?? I'd really like to read any further chapters. If you can't, then that's okay. I'll just add you to my favorite stories list. ^_~ |
Reviewed By: Yash'sChick On: January 12, 2003 14:27 CST
Comment/Review:
Captivating story! PLEASE update ASAP! |
Reviewed By: lala On: January 08, 2003 14:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
well i thought this fic was written pretty well...but its seems really sad so far.... and who is this snowflake guy?! i dont whether to hate him or not.... heh heh ^_^;;; well anyway update this fic =D |
Reviewed By: animealam [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2003 04:28 CST
Comment/Review:
Your fic is interesting I really want to know where you're going with it. I hope you update soon |
Reviewed By: unicogurl On: January 08, 2003 00:31 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please you can't stop now, I have to know what happens next!! Great fic keep writing pwease^_^ I like the description of the snowflake guy. please not a sad story though, I can handle sad to begin with as long as it has a happy ending. I'll still read even if it is all sad but warn me first:) |
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 On: January 07, 2003 21:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOH this is soo good please update again soon. I'm hooked |
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 On: January 06, 2003 15:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You can call me a freak if you want but I like sad story's so if that is were your going with this cool...I liked this begaining please continue ; ) |
Reviewed By: Fasha Youkai [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2003 09:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I got a little confused at the beging but it is very good i liked it. please continue. |
Reviewed By: Pucca [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2003 09:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your fic so far. I really wanna know what happens! Keep writing! |
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