| "Distance" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Alona [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2003 16:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
..wow... This is so great... please, please, please write more soon... |
Reviewed By: halowing4 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2003 22:06 CST
Comment/Review:
Another great chapter! Seth's cleansing of the Nile was very good. Looking forward to more. |
Reviewed By: halowing4 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2003 22:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Great story! I loved the addition of the dragons and was glad Ptolomy got what he deserved for killing Mokuba. This story is a great compliment to "Final Distance". |
Reviewed By: Yami no Kaiba [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2003 14:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, that was wonderful! ^_^ And the person in the shadows, that was just excellent! I don't think I guessed that one at all (unless it goes under the real god damn demon arena...)! And how you got rid of Ptolemy was also pretty smooth. And the dragons! Like, wow! didn't see that one coming at all! ^_^ I'm really happy you've decided to continue this fic, and I don't expect another chapter as long as this one for quite some time. ^_~ |
Reviewed By: Yami no Kaiba On: January 26, 2003 21:08 CST
Comment/Review:
O.O Dang, Ptolemy is one fricken sick SOB if he can do that to a kid. It'll be interesting to see what other ways he'll try to reveal Seth's 'wings'. Also will be interesting to see how Seth and Yami will interact after this. *pokes scary creature in the corner that seems to have an affinity to blood* And you, my dear weird unknown as of yet character, I've got a whole slew of idea's on who you can be. Naoya, Bakura, Pegasus, a real damn demon, or one sick and twisted guardian angel. Yeah. ^^ |
Reviewed By: Yami no Kaiba On: January 21, 2003 16:13 CST
Comment/Review:
^^ I see what you mean, that part was supposed to be in this chapter. Loved it, and I can see why Yami would be so adament against Seth's claim (The two are blood related, after all.) and why Seth would try to keep the promise. It'll be most interesting to see what finally makes Seth pissed off enough to do something about it. |
Reviewed By: halowing4 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2003 22:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this so far. The explanation of Seto's blue eyes makes sense. Looking forward to more. |
Reviewed By: Yami no Kaiba On: January 06, 2003 16:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^ Nice to see you posted it! And so soon after I asked to see it, too! Thankies! Talk to you soon, I hope. Byes! |
Reviewed By: Yami no Kaiba On: January 09, 2003 20:59 CST
Comment/Review:
Love what's going on, what with the allusion to background and a valid reason for Ptolamy (spell?) to not like Yami. Kinda sorry for the Pharaoh's foreshadowing of Seth eventually doing something bad, but it's only natural I guess considering whats going on in the anime. |
