| "FATHER'S DAY" Reviews/Comments [ 29 ] |
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2003 12:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Utterly, utterly excellent!!! Brilliant use of imagination, as per usual, and gripping story line. Great characterisation, very few people write Goku as well as you do. Looking forward to the next installment.
Only one thing let this down... there was NO wet nekkid Bardock this time around... ;_; |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2003 21:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVED THE CHPYYY UPPDATEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
AND HURYYYY IM DYINGGGGGGG!!!!
LATER! |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2003 19:36 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
There are so many great fan fic writers out there...but you are quite possibly the greatest. Your mind comes up with the most original story lines I have ever come across. This is one of my favorite fics of all time. You are truly amazing. |
Reviewed By: Dragon Girl On: April 12, 2003 00:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very good fic. I look forward to reading more of your work.
My question is will there be a sequel. *Hint, hint, wink wink* |
Reviewed By: Lady Valtaya [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2003 00:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it!!!!!!!!!! That was sooooooooooooo funny!!!!!!!!!!! Very cool I can't wait to see what you come up with for the sequel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Email me when you post it I don't care how long it takes!!!!!
I'm Lady Valtaya that's ladyvaltaya@yahoo.com |
Reviewed By: utsukushi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2003 18:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a fantastic fic. I really enjoyed reading it. Your writing style is creative, but understandable. This is one of the most original fic that I have read. (and I've read a lot) I really enjoyed how you let it open to be continued, which I hope that you will do. |
Reviewed By: nene On: January 14, 2003 06:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good and... I'm all in for a sequel, ya know.:) |
Reviewed By: Kalea2882 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2003 22:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MAKE SEQUEL OR DIE!!! |
Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2003 19:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bardockgurl also puts her hand up for a sequel, hoping the wonderous author will agree. A totally amazing story. The sheer scale of the imagination employed by the author is staggering. Bardockgurl is very envious. And, even with the diversity of the plot...evrything fitted!! How did you do this?? An incredible feat. One of the best fics I have ever read, you should be proud of yourself. Thank you. |
Reviewed By: EvilInga On: January 08, 2003 02:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*dances* that was a great story!!! oh!! you should write a sequel!!!! |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 On: January 07, 2003 05:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've said it before...but this was one of the most (if not the most) original fanfics I've ever read! You have such a gift for writing original stories. Well written...and the plot was inspirational.
And...just like everyone else...I want a sequel! |
Reviewed By: punker182biatch [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2003 17:56 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHAT?! It just STOPS!? And after all that!? They need to go look for Cauli! Vegeta never even told Goku that they were brothers!!! *makes a highly frustrated noise* There had BETTER be sequels or ELSE!!!! THIS WAS A GOOD FIC! U CAN'T END IT! |
Reviewed By: Moonshine587 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2003 16:24 CST
Comment/Review:
This is really good! I hope you intend to continue this story; you have left me wanting more. |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2003 12:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was good loved it |
Reviewed By: Lauryn S. On: January 06, 2003 12:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow that was great. a journey in the past. i hope you write more like this and they rescue the queen. i had so much potenial to be a epic story. don't throw it away. hold the storyline and write fruther. |
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