| "FATHER'S DAY" Reviews/Comments [ 29 ] |
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Reviewed By: Silver Lady Crazy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2005 14:46 CDT
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That's one of my favorite fics here in mminer. Quite original, and the guys are in character. Vegeta and Goku brothers? Sounds amazing, but makes sense, they bicker around like two brothers,hehe. Pity the end was a little boring, with reunion and all, but at at least Goku found the woman for him. I think you made Chichi too cruel, too, deep down she likes Goku. But anyway, I'm looking forward for the sequel. :)
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Title: I had the same idea!
Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2005 21:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wrote a similar fic only it was from the mother's pov and she ended up on Earth. I love your take on it very original. I really think they are brothers!
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Reviewed By: Dawn Illusion [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2004 11:27 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is really good. I was a little disappointed that you maked "the end" at the end of the second chapeter. Is there any hope that you will continue to write this story? Maybe a sequel? Think about it. Keep up the good work, I like your stories so far. But again, my favorite has been "Fathers Day"
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2004 16:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love these two--I just re-read them again today after a while and probably enjoyed them even more the 2nd go round, even when I knew what was coming. It's not just your gift for narrative and plot that separates this one from the pack; the Goku-Vegeta dynamic is really fun! Great to read a non-yaoi fic where they interact. And even tho I love Chi and usually dislike OCs, I think Cauli and Lettice were wonderful. Brava. debbiechan
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Reviewed By: trunks1gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2004 16:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a good fic. are you going to write any more? If so I can't wait!
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2004 23:42 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You may have finished chapter 2 with "THE END" but this ain't over. Keep going. I really enjoyed reading it. Must needs sequel. *whine whine pout pout bat bat*
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Reviewed By: LZ On: December 27, 2003 09:04 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an absolutly fantastic! I only hope this doesn't stop right here. There could/should be so much more that occurs after this reunion. In other words, plz write more on this event or what happens when they come to earth, that sorta thing. Once again, good job!
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Reviewed By: LZ On: December 27, 2003 09:04 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is absolutly fantastic! I only hope this doesn't stop right here. There could/should be so much more that occurs after this reunion. In other words, plz write more on this event or what happens when they come to earth, that sorta thing. Once again, good job!
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Title: Great Fic!
Reviewed By: Sundragon (not signed on) On: December 26, 2003 11:26 CST
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That was one heck of a one-shot! You MUST do a sequal! MUST! Please! *cut puppy-dog eyes* Adios!
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Title: LisaB
Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2003 10:02 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is an EXCELLENT fic. Totally original. Great work.
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Reviewed By: I Luv Vege *I really should log in* On: October 18, 2003 07:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH wow! That was great!! I luv it!! Hehe.. Goku and Vegeta are brothers!! This fitted in well with the original story line, very well done!!! Your technique is just about flawless!! I don't think I noticed any spelling and/or grammar mistakes either!! That deserves 10/10 in itself!! You should really write a sequel to this! Maybe write about how Vegeta and Goku travel in search of Cauli! Ohh and then Goku can find out that she is his mother too!!! WOOWOWOWOWOWWWW!! Hehe.. Please do that! It will be great!! Hehe!! Well.. that was a very good read!! I enjoyed it alot!!!
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Reviewed By: Evil Saint [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2003 04:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! I've often wondered about the posibility of Goku and Vegeta being related and it's so cool to finally see it explored in a fic. Especially one as well written as this one. It kinda screws with Pan/Trunks and Bra/Goten pairings, but the age difference in those have always creeped me out anyway, so go for it ^_~
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Reviewed By: outtadaloop [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2003 14:11 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this fic! One of the most creative DBZ fics I've ever read and very touching at that. I like how you incorporated Father and Mother's Day into Vegeta & Goku's journey to discover their saiyan roots. Will they be returning to Earth with their mother? Please update soon! |
Reviewed By: Hope_Poe26 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2003 01:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I reallly liked your story. I was hoping you would write another chapter as to how things end with Goku and Lettice as they go back to Earth. I would definitely like to know that and see Vegeta go down the aisle to see Bulma. |
Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2003 12:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Utterly, utterly excellent!!! Brilliant use of imagination, as per usual, and gripping story line. Great characterisation, very few people write Goku as well as you do. Looking forward to the next installment.
Only one thing let this down... there was NO wet nekkid Bardock this time around... ;_; |
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